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swift_jams
from big sky on 2007-01-30 12:37 [#02041357]
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I re-worked it a bit. Think it has potential? SW33T
No spoken alphabet. Instead I came up with some lyrics:
"The bricks don't need all that glue, They hold just fine under their own weight. A song breaks through the solid concrete, And it's a nice little ditty.
Not too big, and not too small, And not to hard, and not too soft, For you. For me, too."
I think the vocal work I did this time is MUCH better than other things I've posted. I just need to work on getting away from preset drums now.
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w M w
from London (United Kingdom) on 2007-01-30 12:43 [#02041359]
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ghey
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swift_jams
from big sky on 2007-01-30 12:44 [#02041360]
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Faggot
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Indeksical
from Phobiazero Damage Control (United Kingdom) on 2007-01-30 13:00 [#02041366]
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do you have faggots in america? you know like faggots and peas faggots, mr brains type stuff, or does the word have only the homosexual connotations to it?
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swift_jams
from big sky on 2007-01-30 13:02 [#02041367]
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I don't think so. Fag means cigarette too, but not here, although we acknowledge it. And fag also mean something about an infected hair.
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Indeksical
from Phobiazero Damage Control (United Kingdom) on 2007-01-30 13:03 [#02041368]
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'a song breaks through solid concrete' made me think youre ripping off mr E.
its pleasant enough. id be interested to hear the idea streched out over a whole track. i think its need a lot of work to be aurally interesting for a sustained period. at the moment its nice though. nice and ghey.
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swift_jams
from big sky on 2007-01-30 13:18 [#02041377]
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I think I'll change the recorded guitar to some spacey vibraphone or something with delay/slight filter LFO on it. And the main thing I think I could do here is fix the beat part of it. But thanks! :D
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DirtyPriest
from Copenhagen (Denmark) on 2007-01-30 13:34 [#02041390]
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Vocals Guitar Bell chime
- Boring beat (Find some more interesting sounds, and add some variation)
Suggestion: Add a chorus, and make it into a full track, i could probably love it.
Make the chorus unforgettable and thick!
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forck_02lynix
from brooklyn on 2007-01-30 13:39 [#02041395]
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i don't hear anything.
oh my volume is down.
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forck_02lynix
from brooklyn on 2007-01-30 13:43 [#02041398]
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is pretty nice, i liked the sounds that came out of my speakers. keep going with it! maybe beatbox a little, add some 19khz tones in there... should be good. be sure to credit me for the 19khz suggestion though, i want people to hate me. ;)
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swift_jams
from big sky on 2007-01-30 13:54 [#02041406]
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Hahaha Oohkay. Light whispered beatboxing sounds good. A scat/beatbox mix.
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zero-cool
on 2007-01-30 17:49 [#02041533]
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realistic drums with lots of tom toms, i guess maybe work on the beat as if you have one hand?
i like but
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futureimage
from buy FIR from Juno (United Kingdom) on 2007-01-31 11:15 [#02042061]
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Stopped working.
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