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Looking for some feedback. Try and trace out where your mind went when you listened to each part. |
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I'm not much of a knowledgeable critic, but I'll write what I think as I listen: Part I: the echoing sounds at ~1:00 seem out of place, I think the first part was more interesting without them. see what it sounds like without them at all? I just thought the sounds at the beginning were a lot more interesting alone. Part II: this sounds more fitting for those echoes and more coherent so far. Don't like the static that just startled me too much, maybe mess with the levels of that sound. there is a little much going on for me around 2:00, too dense. it feels like something should be brought forward more instead of just a mashup of all these sounds. ending was nice. Part III: pretty nice balance of atmosphere here, and not too much going on. makes me think of being inside a big computer or electric machine. hopefully this is constructive criticism, but i think for the first 2 parts you were trying to do too much. there is good movement in all three parts, so don't do anything with that, but i think it might help to be more selective (especially in some of the really dense parts in part II). |
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The dense layering of sounds is to invoke confusion and anxiousness. Thanks for listening and commenting. Much appreciated. bump |
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It sounds like selected jkd works volume II |
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Now with two additional tracks: (in the circus/vomit genre), and (ooo spooky) DOUBLE DARE |
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Sounds like ocarina windmill music with pitch shifting and noises. |
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That works, then. definately made me a little anxious, maybe not so much confused. I guess I was just looking at it differently, through my own biases. I'll listen to the other ones when I'm not somewhere so loud, cause overall i liked the first ones. |
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