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Ok, so my theme was "Perfume", and the project was "Visual Interpretation". So, what do I do? I go home, get some perfume, set up cameras, take pictures, get the design. Which is your favorite? Any feedback is gladly welcome. Thanks. :] |
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the first imo |
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I don't like the pink splodges above the bottle. is splodges a worrd? |
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Yeah, I am considering taking it out. |
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Yeah the pink splodges are vector graphics stuck over a photo, which usually looks stupid. Ever heard of Peter Saville? If you're into design you should check him out. |
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Yes yes yes. Like his stuff. I read about him in a college catalogue last year. |
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Was the concept "A visual interpretation of Perfume" or "Design a perfume advert"? The text spacing on the second one is nasty. And it's "its" in this instance. I quite like the pink splodges though. Should be bigger. Professor dog_belch dispenses a: B- |
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it looks grand, only there shouldn't be an apostrophe in the second picture |
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ah, dan noticed it already.. sorry |
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Redrum's a student teacher on placement in XLT Design College, he's still learning the ropes.. *AHEM*... carry on class. Next week I want you to bring in a smooth object, a roughly textured object and a piece of material. That's right bitches, it's proper drawing time. With pencils and shit. |
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Sweet, thanks for comments. It was supposed to be we were given a word, randomly, and we could do anything to show it we wanted, so I chose an advertisment, because you usually see "perfume" being advertised. I did a few more also, and in different color schemes. |
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You need to 'sex it up' a bit. Make the bottle look like a marital aid have a saucy perfume name. |
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Hot damn, good suggestion, I'm on it. (Literally) |
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Ha! Get that man a job at Goldman & Snatch Communications Agency, NOW. |
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Turned in. Good response from class. I ended up giving them the one withe the olve background "Perfume" and the Blue version of "Lancome Paris". |
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I don't get it. where's the creativity? |
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you can just make it out in the white border, about 3/4 of the way down on the left hand side |
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hey that's clever. |
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fine |
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pass the dutchie on the left hand side |
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