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I cant find any real people to tell me where ive gone wrong this time, and I want to finalise this little number by wednesday so please, I would appreciate any and all feedback. . the track is called Yearsley... Anything sound wrong at all to you please let me know in as much details as you feel like. |
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Yes yes I am aware of that |
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You need to get rid of all the fiddly bits, and strip it down to three or four (at the most) really, really catchy synth lines. Get rid of the sample of the fella talking, he sounds like Al Gore, or some other technocratic fag. If you can't imagine 19 year old girls dancing to it in pink catsuits, then just scrap it and start again. Plus, it needs more of a 2 step influnce, all that acid shit is over. It's be done a million times and re-done a million times. If that still doesn't sound wicked enough, drench it all in distortion and stick the tempo up by 10 bpm. Good luck, you'll need it! |
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It sounds quite good to me. A touch post-Analord, but different enough to stand on its own. I like the "pop" aspect, the claps, ... as a low key electro acid "dance" number I'd say this is pretty fine. I can't hear anything "wrong", per se. |
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If that still doesn't sound wicked enough, drench it all in distortion and stick the tempo up by 10 bpm. that's my modus operandi. I agree ditch the sample though. |
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you need a nice big fat leading bassline coming in when the proper beat starts. currently it sounds lacking in 'fullness' if you know what i mean. imagine if you will the music is only prancing upon the water, let is plunge below and spring back up. |
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Yeah, what's with all this shit that sounds like Analord? At least rip off someone like Team Doyobi, like I do. That way, you can pretend you're being original. |
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I concur with Dog_Belch. As an end of the night techno track to put people in a slightly inward looking, mildy melancholy frame of mind so they don't cause any trouble when you want them to leave, it'd be ideal. If you were going to play it "out", I would remove the vocal though and replace it with an inane dance vocal like, "dance together in unity" repeated over and over for the entirety of the track with an lfo-controlled (cutoff) highpass filter on it. |
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i spose ill have to ditch the talking, i might have to find some more subtle background noise. i know acid is a bit sicknening at this point but i wasnt too heavy on it i hope. im not sure what i can do for a beefier bassline besides tweaking the bass synth, i thought it was already getting to crowded at the drop. ill investigate tho oh and fuck off swears |
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that was to everyone btw |
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it's really good by the way :D |
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Why fuck off? This advice is pure gold, babes. |
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thanks fella :) |
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breaking news swears is a raging horndog |
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Being a horndog is good because you're whole drive behing making music is to make girls pull faces like this: |
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*your whole... THE SHAME! |
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* your hole |
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well, this isn't exactly my type of music, but it would sound a bit better with a heavier pure saw bassline.. one of those that carry the song along. some of the drumsounds could also use some fucking with. |
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