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ok i've been working on this a while, don't know how to finish it. arrgh. doing my head in. any comments feed back as ever thanks :) |
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downloading ! |
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What is your artist name supposed to be for this track ? |
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boris johnson |
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i like it very much sir, will listen on proper speakers in a bit. I think maybe the melody that comes in around 1.20 needs more pauses, it just seems a bit relentless. |
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ok, *re-tagging mp3* |
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and what about your track called "87" ? |
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glad you like it, cheers |
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Woah, that's classic Ambient right there, stays just this side of Deep Forest (and not just because there's no pygmies in it). I like it. If you add in at about the 4 minute mark some breathy Italian woman (or Tridenti sped up) saying sexy talk I think you'd make a fortune getting picked up by "Essential Chill vol.932093" |
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Wow, that is great. That is really good, listening again now with more volume :D To finish it, just add 20 more seconds and fade out. That's all it needs to be complete This is great ambient. Keep up the good work. Sounds really professional too, but please a proper ID3 tag! |
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ok when the snare comes in it sounds really horrible, its fine later when there is less going on but at the start it just doesn't sound right. Some parts have too many layers at once, I would thin it out a little. yours truly dannn underscore |
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whats actually wrong with the snare? just the 'wrong sound'? |
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or Tridenti sped up that sounds potentially dangerous. |
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downloading into folder i_x_ten aka ben johnson aka boris becker |
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its good, man, nice buildup, good track. do something with that snare though. and change up the sounds of the melody if possible? |
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nice track yeah ! |
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it sounds like it was '93 again or something. it is good, saved. don't change it. |
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what is everyone on about? the snare is fine. this is well produced track, and apart from the abrupt ending sounds fine. don't change it because it is great minimal. please don't go jazzing it up. It takes a good song to go on for a long time with little variation. |
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erm... i just think it should be punchier, a bit more of a clap kind of sound, maybe a bit quieter |
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i guess i see that... its kinda hard to change something once you're set in your ways though! bump |
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tump bump |
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