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-poem. a story of waking up this morning touch the rainbow of emotion, incandescent huez marked across oceans of time, reality bides in the darkest hours... smiling at my fate. dawn melts horrors unexplained, as my eyes blur from bleak conversations with translucent souls, your spirit foils the only song i ever had left for you. my self remains in silence, but i hear a voice so loud with confusion and disappoinment, the echoes return as we touch the glass wall between us. intentions lost in a tenuous labrynth of enmity, the mystery remains while i hold the beginning of the end, right around the corner. it was always there, and inevitable as tomorrow. the ends are the same, but yet it still manages to smear my spirit into dust. nothing was in vain. you will be missed. it wasnt what i needed at that time or this... so i can see your point. |
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*loks up at the sky* |
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i won't hate you forever! |
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You are very talented warh0l - very talented indeed! Is poetry a hobby of yours? |
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Good stuff...but it begs the question: what exactly did you do wrong? }:> |
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Hahahaha, you just read my mind arf old chum. |
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shit you use just about every clichéd word that can be used in poetry! |
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first rule of writing: the text is not the author! :P |
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mine |
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i used to take lsd and write poetry and think it was good until i read the invisibles |
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i was wrong |
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you are very talented indeed. \/\/. |
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it won't give up it wants me dead and god damn this noise inside my head |
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