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Raz0rBlade_uk
on 2005-07-14 15:45 [#01663031]
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Hi there all you lovely little happy fluff bunnies! Right, so, I have been working on this track. It's kind of ambientish stylee etc.
I'm pretty sure it's finished but I thought I'd check with my fellow xlt soldiers first. Feedback would be loved :D :D
District Hall.mp3
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Drunken Mastah
from OPPERKLASSESVIN!!! (Norway) on 2005-07-14 15:48 [#01663033]
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checking, but it may take some time.. I HATE wireless connections!!!
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Drunken Mastah
from OPPERKLASSESVIN!!! (Norway) on 2005-07-14 15:52 [#01663035]
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at about 1/4 into it where it becomes really massive.. everything kind of blended into one sound... I don't know if you mean for this to happen, but...
I like those parts where everything suddenly goes extremely over-quantified on the drums...
it was a nice track.. varied enough for its length even though most of it was done on the drums...
overall a good job!
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Raz0rBlade_uk
on 2005-07-14 15:56 [#01663040]
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thanks for checking it out mastah! ooh. i nearly typed mustang then...
anyway, yeah, thanks for your comments!
:D :D :D
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Drunken Mastah
from OPPERKLASSESVIN!!! (Norway) on 2005-07-14 15:59 [#01663044]
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hmm.. drunken mustang...
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_gvarek_
from next to you (Poland) on 2005-07-14 15:59 [#01663045]
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Quite good. Nice atmosphere, and leading melody. Only the beats lack some depth, but... altogether, they`re not bad also. I`d stick with the breaks at the end. It would be good, maybe even better, without any beats.
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Raz0rBlade_uk
on 2005-07-14 16:00 [#01663046]
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hmm, maybe. I'll see what an ambient version would be like
thanks for the idea! and thanks for listening!
:D
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Raz0rBlade_uk
on 2005-07-14 16:23 [#01663073]
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spunk!
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Raz0rBlade_uk
on 2005-07-14 16:59 [#01663130]
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good night all! i expect this thread to have 50 posts by the morning!
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Taffmonster
from dog_belch (Japan) on 2005-07-14 17:01 [#01663133]
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just getting now
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Gob Beldof
on 2005-07-14 17:05 [#01663144]
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david coulthard
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Taffmonster
from dog_belch (Japan) on 2005-07-14 17:11 [#01663157]
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like the time changes alot not sure on the fake guitar sound other than that its really really good, the beat its HUGE and the buffer overide bit sounds really good (that plugin can go really wrong)
good work :)
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JLefrere
from London (United Kingdom) on 2005-07-14 17:14 [#01663159]
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Nice stuff, very varied, I like the piano especially, but I'd probably go for less reverb/sustain/release (whichever it is) for the intro. I can't claim to've made anything myself but just think it might sound better. But yeah, this is good.
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Raz0rBlade_uk
on 2005-07-20 12:27 [#01669583]
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Thanks for listening chaps! Sorry about the delayed response :D
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Clic
on 2005-07-20 12:30 [#01669586]
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Digital pianos always bother me.
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Raz0rBlade_uk
on 2005-07-20 12:31 [#01669596]
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not this one!
just listen to it as a nice sound
forget all the negative connotations
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Raz0rBlade_uk
on 2005-07-20 12:33 [#01669598]
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+ it does change for a bit to a different synth if you give it a chance and listen on
I can imagine you clicking it, listening for 3 seconds and then closing it. That thought makes me sad :(
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Clic
on 2005-07-20 12:38 [#01669607]
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No, I listened to the whole track.
It's not really my thing, but some advice would be to add some dynamics to the percussion. Mess with the velocity a bit, etc.
What are you doing all this in, if you don't mind me asking?
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Raz0rBlade_uk
on 2005-07-20 12:48 [#01669633]
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the most noobish piece of sequencing software
FL Studio 5
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Clic
on 2005-07-20 12:57 [#01669644]
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It's all good. It's just how you go about doing things.
I use a pretty low-budget setup. I just can't seem to get into anything I make lately.
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Raz0rBlade_uk
on 2005-07-20 14:00 [#01669707]
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that's a bit of a bugger.
yeah I've always believed that you can make professional sounding stuff on a low budget
any other listeners?
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ecnadniarb
on 2005-07-21 15:14 [#01671327]
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Ack fuck...I was just going to type how much I was enjoying it. Then it all went like all of your tracks with the tempo shifts...it is probably your strongest piano/breakbeat/tempo shifting effort.
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yann_g
from now on 2005-07-21 19:08 [#01671613]
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don't like when the tempo is slowed down @ 1:30. those pizzicato-like sounds are great!
i don't understand how the track evolves, those speed variations don't speak to me, and imo the chords should change sometimes...
sounds good anyway, it's just like if someone were telling a story i like the sentences without getting the general meaning.
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obara
from Utrecht on 2005-07-22 04:53 [#01671992]
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i must say the trakcq is very interesting. only the drum/amen source gets a bit too obvious at the end. perhaps the trakc could be just 3 minutes long, cause everyting within the first 3 minutes is very well structured, you can't get bored with the track. the tension is kept and so on. and the piano sounds - dark but verry nice. saved !
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Raz0rBlade_uk
on 2005-07-22 05:08 [#01672001]
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what a nice surpise! I thought this thread was long gone.
Thanks for listening you three. I may remove that tempo change at 1:30
ecnad: i'm confused to whether you like it or not lol!
obara: i may develop the amenage at the end a little
Thanks again, you guys are great!
(track image below) - Bitraete Tracks
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