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obara
from Utrecht on 2005-05-25 05:47 [#01611504]
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hello everyone....i'd like to take you on a magical trip....
this is a fresh project that i put together with my mate. if you like the tracks that's great ! and if you don't like them.....that's ok too !
anyway, any technical/mixing comments and suggestions would be most welcome
thanks !
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KADO
from The Belafonte (United Kingdom) on 2005-05-25 05:55 [#01611507]
Points: 1484 Status: Regular | Followup to obara: #01611504
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*Downloading :)
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Matvey
from Kiev (Ukraine) on 2005-05-25 06:06 [#01611510]
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caebabyd is nice. i won't download other two today, but later will. but it said "lyrics" - i didn't notice any lyrics in this track.
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KADO
from The Belafonte (United Kingdom) on 2005-05-25 06:10 [#01611512]
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caebabyd - A little more work on the sound pallette would improve things, The main melody sound is a little bland. The beats are interesting but could do with being punchier. I like that the track has lots of layers to it, some nice details in there. I would head back to the mix down stage and cook it a little longer.
nowy - This is my favourite of the three tracks, much more thoughtful sound selection, I enjoyed the jazzy break and lush keys at the start of the track, the only thing i didn't like was the bass.. until half way into the track it begins to get more exciting. It's nice and subtle...good effort
rekomora 2 - Again the beats are interesting, I thought the textures were a little too loud and abrasive in the mix but I like the vocal ambience part. This needs injecting with some extra sounds and variation to keep it exciting, I got a little bored after 2 minutes.
Apologies for being overcritical, I personally like my work being picked at when i get reviewed to help me improve. I can see you put a lot of time and effort into this, it's a good attempt but just needs a little extra attention in places. Good luck with your future stuff :)
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obara
from Utrecht on 2005-05-25 07:33 [#01611536]
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Mat : thanks a lot, did you really expect any lyrics ? :)
KADO : excellent review , thanks for your time. You're not overcritical, that's very helpful. You're right, those tracks haven't been much mixed yet. They sound quite lame. My mate has just started making music and this project is sort of to help him start. We chose the tracks/ideas we both like. And we got to the moment when we need to have someone objective enough to show us the weak points.
Thanks again.
oh, and bump bump bump.
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Matvey
from Kiev (Ukraine) on 2005-05-25 07:55 [#01611553]
Points: 6851 Status: Regular | Followup to obara: #01611536
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a bit, yes I did expect some fantomas-style vocal perversy! :)
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obara
from Utrecht on 2005-05-25 14:59 [#01611927]
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[bump]
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Drunken Mastah
from OPPERKLASSESVIN!!! (Norway) on 2005-05-25 15:32 [#01611960]
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not really my cup 'o tea. sorry.
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obara
from Utrecht on 2005-05-25 15:45 [#01611977]
Points: 19377 Status: Regular | Followup to Drunken Mastah: #01611960
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that's ok !
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big
from lsg on 2005-05-26 03:24 [#01612289]
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ok, i just listened a little bit and wasnt too moved by it i still like you though :)
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obara
from Utrecht on 2005-05-26 04:38 [#01612320]
Points: 19377 Status: Regular | Followup to big: #01612289
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i like you too !
the REAL fun should begin next week, stay tuned at planear.
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big
from lsg on 2005-05-26 07:22 [#01612441]
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sure thing
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