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CS2x
from London (United Kingdom) on 2005-04-25 16:21 [#01576674]
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Hi, I am a big Autechre fan! So I have decided to write a poem about them:
Systematic Parhelic Triangles manifest through a thousand yard stairs,
Magnificent globules of square sound transcend through multiple atmospheres,
Mathematical Partatios triumphanty convolute to form new shapes of infinate beauty,
Brain-shatteringly complex musical entities flucctuate within a sphere of a second,
To form into an elephant of cock and fuck.
Thankyou.
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qrter
from the future, and it works (Netherlands, The) on 2005-04-25 16:23 [#01576685]
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fluctuate is with one c.
and infinite has no a.
and "thank you" consists of 2 seperate words.
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dariusgriffin
from cool on 2005-04-25 16:25 [#01576688]
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Thank you for sharing this, beautiful work.
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qrter
from the future, and it works (Netherlands, The) on 2005-04-25 16:25 [#01576690]
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it's a gift.
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CS2x
from London (United Kingdom) on 2005-04-25 16:25 [#01576691]
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Thank {space} you qrter. I have no re-written the poem in its entirety with your corrections:
Systematic Parhelic Triangles manifest through a thousand yard stairs, Magnificent globules of square sound transcend through multiple atmospheres, Mathematical Partatios triumphanty convolute to form new shapes of infinite beauty, Brain-shatteringly complex musical entities fluctuate within a sphere of a second, To form into an elephant of cock and fuck.
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r40f
from qrters tea party on 2005-04-25 16:26 [#01576692]
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i never read poetry, but that was nice.
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qrter
from the future, and it works (Netherlands, The) on 2005-04-25 16:26 [#01576696]
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you might want to have a look at "triumphanty" too.
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oper4t0r
from OS 1.1 on 2005-04-25 16:27 [#01576698]
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haha. here's mine. fap fap fap fap fap fap fap fap fap fap fap fap fap fap fap fap fap fap fap fap fap fap fap fap fap fap fap fap fap fap fap fap fap fap fap fap fap fap fap fap fap.
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corticalstim
from Canada on 2005-04-25 16:27 [#01576699]
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Roses are red, voilets are blue, your poetry sucks, and 1 43 fronkesssssssturactionhuntdddddddddddddeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrr 2o jh2t4,m2 4t09rgf9w r4kl2hj4 9fdg +@3124(5), r3275298532|~
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earthleakage
from tell the world you're winning on 2005-04-25 16:27 [#01576700]
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sepArate
duh
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qrter
from the future, and it works (Netherlands, The) on 2005-04-25 16:28 [#01576704]
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oops, you're right.
thank you.
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r40f
from qrters tea party on 2005-04-25 16:29 [#01576706]
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wow. i just exploded.
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earthleakage
from tell the world you're winning on 2005-04-25 16:29 [#01576707]
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your welcome
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CS2x
from London (United Kingdom) on 2005-04-25 16:31 [#01576713]
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A *clap and dance!* version::
Systematic Parhelic Triangles manifest through a thousand yard stairs, (feal the rythm!) Magnificent globules of square sound transcend through multiple atmospheres, (alright!) Mathematical Partatios triumphantly convolute to form new shapes of infinite beauty, (uh, uh) Brain-shatteringly complex musical entities fluctuate within a sphere of a second, (clap your hands) To form into an elephant of cock and fuck. (move your feet, feel the beet)
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cygnus
from nowhere and everyplace on 2005-04-25 16:32 [#01576716]
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no
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qrter
from the future, and it works (Netherlands, The) on 2005-04-25 16:37 [#01576725]
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I'm not falling for that one.
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horsefactory
from 💠 (United Kingdom) on 2005-04-25 16:43 [#01576734]
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no
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dog_belch
from Netherlands, The on 2005-04-25 16:47 [#01576746]
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I'm glad we were all able to share another one of your Autechre based jokes. It really was worth maintaining a message board for.
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CS2x
from London (United Kingdom) on 2005-04-25 16:54 [#01576755]
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You're welcome Mr. dog_belch. I can almost smell your loving sincerity.
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oyvinto
on 2005-04-25 17:36 [#01576812]
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i'm happy too
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jakson909
on 2005-04-25 17:53 [#01576819]
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dog_felch is fag
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plaidzebra
from so long, xlt on 2005-04-25 18:02 [#01576825]
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excuse me, may i feel your beet?
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fleetmouse
from Horny for Truth on 2005-04-25 18:34 [#01576858]
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I had vegetable lasagne for dinner.
The word vegetable is nice - try and work it into your poem.
I like to accentuate all four syllables: VE - GE - TA - BLE! VE - GE - TA - BLE! VE - GE - TA - BLE! VE - GE - TA - BLE!
Eventually it loses all meaning and becomes a soft pleasant blur.
Wouldn't it be nice to be a rabbit and view a carrot the same way a human views a big juicy steak with all the trimmings?
Mmmm, steak.
Mmmmm, rabbit.
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i_x_ten
from arsemuncher on 2005-04-25 19:08 [#01576893]
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actually you're wrong, thankyou is acceptable.
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Lust Incarnate
from the edge of the deep green sea (United States) on 2005-04-25 19:43 [#01576911]
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It's you're welcome ;)
I am very confused by this poem. It sounds like magnetic poetry for nerds. :)
I like opers: "fap fap fap" (repeat a million times)
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qrter
from the future, and it works (Netherlands, The) on 2005-04-25 19:52 [#01576923]
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no, you are wrong.
"thank-you" as in "saying your thank-yous" - yes.
"thankyou" - no.
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