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feedback is appreciated.. |
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epic - a bit unstructured. it follows a "tracker pattern" where each new theme is just added to the previous theme... do a break and a different part. that one synth could also be brought back and lowered in the mix, but otherwise this is a good start. fairy - this one is better. it has some structure, but there should also be a part where you change the melody on top. both enjoyable tracks, but they need some more work. you do music better than you do threads at least. |
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haha well, they were both made in like 40 minutes just fucking around, i never spend much more time on my tracks.. i'll see if i cant add something new to them though |
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about half the internet makes tracks like these. |
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perhaps, but are they good tracks none the less? |
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good shit man. but oi am out of myu face so what. |
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epic could use a bit more variation. its too loopy. also, the synth levels need to be adjusted, and the drums brought to the front more. but with this many different pieces to a track, it should be too difficult to build it into something that grows. fairy is more likeable. the melodies are real nice, as are the sounds. you should basically work on getting the different parts more varied, your songs are the same rhythm all the way through, it just doesn't seem to really move anywhere. i hope the feedback helps. feel free to check out my tracks, which are linked in my thread (its a bit of a ways down there unfortunately) |
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thanks to both of you im working on epic first cause my ears are tired of fairy atm, also im gonna check out your music in a minute |
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I enjoyed fairy, pretty generic though. |
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i don't really like epic very much. it's ok i guess but it's to repetitive and the synth sound that comes in at 0:27 is too loud. i don't really like the drums either. i guess i'm not really being much help here, am i? fairy is nice though. |
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I don't like them, no. it's more of the same, there's already more than enough of that. then again, you did only spend 40 minutes on it, maybe with more time you can make something that is more individual, more you. I'll stop talking now. |
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hehe ok, im uploading a new version of epic now.. |
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well i know, the problem is i have enough trouble making shit harmonic and stuff as it is and arranging and adding variation, much less make something original.. here maybe you'll find this a bit more original; also heres the new epic; |
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C-fern |
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bearing in mind those 40 minutes, after first listen.....: epic - the beginning is promising. but the beat ruins it all. it doesn't have to be that fast, does it ? epic v2 - a bit better, but the beat.... soldace - i like it. though i agree with ppl, about making another pattern as a bridge somewhere in the middle. and a fade-in copy of the main theme coming at the end. at least. fairy/melody - i like this one too. but the bassline... longer sounds maybe. i'd work on it. not bad overall |
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i cant stand it when people brag about how little time they invested in tracks. it only implies you could make awesome tracks when you invested more time |
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second track is alright |
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soldace is good |
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the melody in Epic is really bad. Sorry. |
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