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falling leafs seeing you posting at this em-be makes me a little bee-dee-dee-bee hitting the keyboard, why, my oh, why she wanted to kiss me, but it was a lie i started to wank, i started to cry hitting the keyboard, why, my oh, why the tears are faling, so as the leafs beeing a mod here makes me believe that this whole webpage, with "more stuff coon" is just a myth, like, sun and the moon dont cry too hard, babe, dont wank to fast the wankarz are sleepy, but not the last the leafs are falling, just like my tears for all who read this - regards and peas |
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cheesy peas? |
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Beautiful, poignant and a joy to have experienced. |
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"more stuff coon"? works for me |
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you just know sheet about artistic way of seeing letters |
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genius |
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Squeezy cheesy peas! |
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poetry is a performance art. |
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*tear* |
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"dont wank to fast" should read don't wank too fast- poetic liscense be damned. other than that it sucks. |
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wow. that's intense. |
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"don't wank to fast" was one of my favourite parts, and why would it have to be changed to "don't wank too fast"? Then it loses a lot of its meaning. dont cry too hard, babe, dont wank to fast the wankarz are sleepy, but not the last This section is explaining that in this world that moves at an unrelenting pace: don't feel sorry for yourself ("dont cry too hard") "babe" is a direct reference to the generic sociological labelling, "don't wank to fast" Stop chasing after self satisfaction because it will lead to missing out on everything that is on offer, like an unnecessary fasting from food. It's brilliant. |
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it;s like Bullwinkle poetry corner :) |
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Well now that you've explained it Id have to say it just mostly sucks. |
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Marcin, you're my member of 2005 so far, unofficially - for this one poem |
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