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jkd
from Twitch City (Canada) on 2004-10-16 13:56 [#01364793]
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this is a song i've been working on which is mainly guitar. comments/criticism welcome.
here's a direct link hosted from my laptop (so it's not really permanent):
jkd - coming back.mp3
and it's also up here:
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r40f
from qrters tea party on 2004-10-16 14:20 [#01364803]
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so far it sounds really nice. the mix is great. i think it could use some more different sounds/textures. the main guitar melodic riff is a little too repetative for me - maybe be if it was in the background more or something... the drums sound really nice. good stuff
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phiz
from Liverpool (United Kingdom) on 2004-10-16 14:20 [#01364804]
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sounds great, really clean, what are you gonna use it with? be interesting to hear it with some nice beats or a break. you've got skills.
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jkd
from Twitch City (Canada) on 2004-10-16 14:34 [#01364809]
Points: 1138 Status: Lurker | Followup to r40f: #01364803
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i think you're right; it is maybe a bit too repetitive. i could maybe vary it more, or bring it into the background and have something else take the focus. thanks for listening, much appreciated. :)
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jkd
from Twitch City (Canada) on 2004-10-16 14:35 [#01364810]
Points: 1138 Status: Lurker | Followup to phiz: #01364804
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hmm, i wonder how that would sound... adding a break to it. thanks for the idea, i think i'll experiment with that. :)
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jkd
from Twitch City (Canada) on 2004-10-17 13:31 [#01365428]
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bump. here's a direct link that's permanent:
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