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Come listen to my pretty song, fellows... It's called Chloe. Feed me back. I love you |
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Fuck I done screwed up. Try this. |
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what if i dont want to listen? |
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hi dan i just might have the time today! :) |
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like delicious poop through the sewers. |
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I'll kiss your face even if you call my track nasty things. Apologies for the crackly bits sometimes, Zebox wanted it under 5mb. |
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fucking zebox is being a fucking pain in the bunghole downloading at fucking 5 kb per fucking second |
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try using regular seconds. |
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it was okay. i dont know what to say really. i liked the sounds you used, exept for the thing that comes in at :49, it sounds a bit too .. preset overall i enjoyed it, nice composition but a bit .. pointless |
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think yer fucking tough, dont ya? |
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Fair enough, I've got a lot of nice riffs but maybe I should do a shorter edit that gets to the point quicker. |
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It's a good track, but it needs a more prominent break somewhere... you should change the theme completely.. You should try with a tad heavier drums when they finally kick in... and the pizzicato should be exchanged for something else. other than that, good job! |
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thanks peanut |
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Oh sweet jesus what the hell is that constant high pitched whine... BAD BAD BAD MAKES ME WANT TO BURN THINGS. The quality sucks... I know you can't help it... The melody is a good patch, it just doesn't seem to go anywhere. It helps when the second stuff in the background comes in, fills in some space, helped a lot. The pizzicato isn't bad, but again, changing up the melody some would be awesome... some changing element over the top would help a TON. Like one of the patches with some slow cutoff/res change or something. It's just blending into nothing, but not in a brian eno / philip glass ambient kinda way. As a 1 minute idea it's cool, it just sorta drags on... shorter edit would be key, good instinct |
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