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AphexTwin11
from OOOOOO (United States) on 2004-07-29 15:41 [#01289954]
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here and here and here Comments? tell me if they dont work.
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AphexTwin11
from OOOOOO (United States) on 2004-07-29 15:43 [#01289958]
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2nd one 3rd one
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AphexTwin11
from OOOOOO (United States) on 2004-07-29 15:51 [#01289964]
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the last 2 still dont work, heres the last time. 2nd one" target=blank>last time for 2 2nd one" target=blank>last time for 3
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AphexTwin11
from OOOOOO (United States) on 2004-07-29 15:52 [#01289966]
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LAZY_TITLE LAZY_TITLE
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AphexTwin11
from OOOOOO (United States) on 2004-07-29 15:53 [#01289969]
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ahhh!!! ahhh!!!
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AphexTwin11
from OOOOOO (United States) on 2004-07-29 15:57 [#01289971]
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it worked that time *passes out from stupid comuter*
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AphexTwin11
from OOOOOO (United States) on 2004-07-29 15:57 [#01289972]
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sorry everyone for so much posting
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ecnadniarb
on 2004-07-29 15:59 [#01289973]
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hmmm, first one basically sounds too basic and rushed. Second one sounds better than the first one. Dance music. Third one drum and bass lite..belongs on the soundtrack of a driving game. They aren't bad but all three are a little weak and would benefit from a lot more work.
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AphexTwin11
from OOOOOO (United States) on 2004-07-29 16:03 [#01289976]
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ill work on it, thanks for comments :)
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dog_belch
from Netherlands, The on 2004-07-29 16:30 [#01289993]
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I do like all of these, I agree with Mr ecnadniarb that they could benefit from a little extra work to lift them from "quite good" to "blimey". I did like "Cruise", it's like d'n'b from as heard from a very poorly tuned pirate radio station, and that, to me, sounds good. Spacefunk, whilst I don't like the title (I'd call it "Eagle Toast" or "Flax the main potlap" or something absurd, probably) I think is rather jolly in an alternative chill-out style, and "Vines" has a lot of potential, I like it possibly the most. They're quite subtle, which to me is a good thing, so it's hard to say too much, only that I like where you're coming from. Maybe all I'd say is perhaps try and add a bit more of your own style to the tracks.
I've listened to them all through again and I do really like them. Maybe don't listen to my advice and just carry on.
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