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I woke up this morning and recorded my new guitar song. Excuse my singing. |
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Cute! |
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Hahaha it just finished.. that was cool! I liked the 'some place bettAH' near the end, topped it off nicely. |
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thanks, max, I'm glad that you enjoyed it :) |
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Some Place Better Well you know that I wanted to be with you, You know, I waited by the door, But you, wanted some place better, And I fell upon your empty footprints. Well you know that the truth is always with you, You know you can't escape my eyes, But I don't know where to look, And I'm blind from searching for you. So come back to me, be the man I always dreamt you would be. I don't care, just as long as I feel you again. You were bad to me, how can I survive like this? I can't exist, until I feel you again. |
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hey wow, I just saw that I'm the #5 most-visited zebox artist in the United Kingdom - how dope is that! |
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what a shame for me no-one else has posted in this thread :( |
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Listening now... |
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As always i enjoyed it. |
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heya paul ! |
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hi emmalove. hi skinklove, thanks for lissening and appressiating. |
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I shall listen to this track when I gets 'ome like innit gotta hear the savage sing I'll see if I can come up with some backing vocals/harmony for ya too ;oD We'll call our selves "The Strangled Cats" |
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that would be awesome - just sing 'AHHH' on the A above middle C and it will sound great. |
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This is a definitely a good song. I will bump it sometime later on because of this fact. |
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you are too kind, alex :) |
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Yup, i am still really liking this. |
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I still havent had a chance to listen =o( |
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Its okay. I'm not one for "love/I miss you" songs. Needs a bit of cleaning up production wise, not that I absolutely have to have every track that I listen to be professional studio quality with mastering, but theres some clipping issues and little things that would help. |
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that's a pretty bad song, sorry Paul.. nice to hear you sing though. I quite like the lo-fi, demo-feel of the production. the line "And I fell upon your empty footprints." made me laugh. I think it's the word 'footprints', but I don't really know why it made me laugh.. mm.. :) |
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I like your voice a LOT more in this song than your last one. Better inflections. The chord progressions are a bit wonky at times, though, particularly during the little ''instrumental break''. Not a great song, but I love your vocals here. |
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i had to look up 'wonky' on merriam webster. i've downloaded it but have not listened yet. |
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It's about my father leaving when I was five - I'm glad it caused you amusement, Alex. |
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i like it, paul. i do agree that a slightly higher production quality would really help it out a lot. |
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it's more about the choice of words, but now you mention the meaning, it does raise the hilarity immensely! |
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If I had an expensive recording suite then the production quality would no doubt be slightly higher. I am glad that you liked the song John thanks for listening. |
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Leonard Cohen |
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