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i need some advice on how to finish or what could be done to this track to finish it thnakcs |
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rockin good track, i think! i like the way the mix sounds and the little melodic riffs a lot. |
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sending it to the recycle bin would be a good start. |
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first, its a little bass heavy. making it sound mushy. bring out the mid, hi. lower the lo so i can hear beats and melodic elements better. i think the beats are the most interesting part of this. sounds to me like it is striving to be an early Download kinda dancy industrial thing. maybe adding some cinematic samples here and there and emphasizing builds and the thump thump dancy nature of the track. that's just what i'm hearing. i don't know what your intentions were so if i'm way off, nevermind all that. |
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comedy isnt your stong point is it |
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no but since i was listening to your track i can see it is yours. |
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what do you mean by cinematic samples? |
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whatever that means. |
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comedy isnt your stong point is it |
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it is meaning he is posting music that is joking bad |
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like some kinda dialogue from old horror or something. that's what i'm hearin'. something like that you know. something right before the beats drop in. listen to some early skinny puppy or other 80's and 90's industrial. that's what your track reminds me of. |
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do you have to be such a prick? i want constructive critisism not some childish crap get fuck out of my thread |
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hmm, it's ok, far too bass heavy though as evolume says. It just sounds really really muffled on my stereo. It does sort of have a dance vibe about it. It's not bad but it is pretty average. Maybe if the sound quality was sorted it would stand out more...yes, sort the sound out and I will have another listen because it is quite enjoyable. |
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dont cry little child |
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he is just lashing out at the world because he gets beat up a lot in real life. |
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ill sort the bass out i think its the crap headphones i used have a listen tommorow, it should be ok |
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hehe true |
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YOUR NAME IS LEE. |
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I like all of it apart from the main "beat", but then I don't really like industrial so I am not the audience. If I did like industrial music this would be my favourite song. I just keep expecting to hear Trent Reznor's ghastly voice whining "Wuuaaarrgh, the scars of my fascist desire erupt on the face of..... DESTRUCTION". I don't know if that's a good thing, depends what you're after. |
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bump |
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you're being inconsequent in your strange use of English. |
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i just thought he was being a prick |
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well.. yes. |
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I really expected that background thing that the track starts out with to change when the percussion dropped in. like a sharp switch from muffled basslike background to the same thing really sharp and full of attack at the foreground. it's an okay track, not really my thing. |
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