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offline cataLYST from Waldorf (United States) on 2004-07-05 15:19 [#01267077]
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new track, feedback yeah!!! =]

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offline ecnadniarb on 2004-07-05 15:25 [#01267085]
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I listened. It was OK. It could be excellent if you could
make it step up a gear at around the 2:30 mark and sustain
through to the end. As it stands it sort of just plods its
way through to the end. It could do with being a minute or
two shorter in it's present form.

There are also obvious RDJ album influences in there, which
I was going to avoid drawing comparisons with, although I am
sure someone else would mention it. If you are going to use
stylistic elements you have to make sure you do a first
class job.

In conclusion, it's OK, but it could be and deserves to be
more.


 

offline cataLYST from Waldorf (United States) on 2004-07-05 15:27 [#01267088]
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yes another element is a good idea.. it was longer but had
to shorten it for zebox.. making it a bit shorter isnt too
bad of an idea either.. maybe make it a filler track



 

offline cataLYST from Waldorf (United States) on 2004-07-05 17:08 [#01267146]
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feedback NOW! thanks :)

 

offline ecnadniarb on 2004-07-05 17:11 [#01267151]
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Hi. As you may have noticed I gave you feedback in an
earlier post of mine numbered 01267085. I was like to make
the following addition to that post.

"Anyway cataLYST that is the last time I bother listening to
anything you make until you get off your arse and
constructively comment on other peoples tracks.

Kindest and warmest regards,

John (that is a fake name supplied out of disgust)."

 

offline cataLYST from Waldorf (United States) on 2004-07-05 17:36 [#01267175]
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I do supply feedback to other tracks.. I can't live with
just one piece of criticism, come on mehn


 

offline darkpromenade from Australia on 2004-07-05 18:21 [#01267230]
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Listened to it.............................. the sound
overall is ok, in terms of style, but I would like to see it
vary some more.......... the beats themselves are good, but
more variation perhaps in the actual sounds used, or perhaps
having the sounds alter and change over time, rather than
just dropping new or different sounds in on the change of
the bars....the hi-hats really bugged me towards the end,
but again, if the whole thing was shorter, this may not be a
problem............... some nice touches in the breakdowns,
but i began to "fear" the return of the beats..........


 

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