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i wrote a poem, and thought some of you might enjoy it.... it was inspired by neutral milk hotel's :oh comely. download it now if you havn't heard it. it's kind of "fat, goth-mall girl"-ish and when i read it now i laugh at the emotions i go through, even tho i just wrote it a few days ago. anyways, i know most of you will probably make mean comments but that's ok.... i'm bored. ehem.... she found her shakespear, he found his muse. third times' a charm? macrobiotic, labodomy thunderstorms, and she performed a vivisection on her own naked body and she bled for everyone she ever knew. i remember, i danced in a downpoor with a boy, i used to adore. we both wore smeared eyeliner and whole hearted smiles. who knew veins could burst like that? she imagined the color perfectly. crimson is such an ugly word. he danced like a girl, in all the black he hid himself, behind. we took polaroids of suicide, and frowned at nothing. years ago, i went to paris in a dream, and fell in love with a boy that had the same eyes as me. a tragedy. i was his muse. he was my shakespeare. |
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that poem paints a really strange picture in my mind. i like it |
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oh comely is way better |
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i like to write poetry while high, then read it the next morning and delete it in discust. there is more than one you, you know... |
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hahahaha you write poetry on your computer is it about how girls always sign off when you're having sex with them |
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thanks, gwely. roygbiv> obvioulsy, oh,comely is better. |
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no it's not better, it's way better like 500 times |
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500 times? wow. that really would mean it's way better. |
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so hard man download it if you can, i'll even send it to you on aim if you use it (it's like 8 minutes long) |
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im sorry. it pales in comparison to my poetry: there once was a boy, who found a dime, it made him happy, until he realized, you cant buy jackshit with 10 cents. |
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oh, sorry.... the title is "Chu Chu Nyong Nyong Heads Journey Into The Realization Of Maturity In The Modern World Volume I." |
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day night sleep eternal |
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