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something i've been working on the past two days. i would like some feedback. this is a demo version, so the intro and end and levels are all obvious points that need improvement - any other criticism is much welcomed. |
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Your drill is beginning to sound a little old fashioned. You need to introduce bleeps and squiggles and more dynamic use of the two available stereo channels. Parts of this track are really nice though, the melody is OK. I didn't like the sound of the synths in parts though. |
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that is perhaps the reason i've been bored with breakcore and drills lately. which synths did you not like? could you point them out? |
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i tried to make the beats later on at 1:55 a bit less drillish and a tad more focused. you think i should drop that noisy beat at 2:33? |
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Nah just work with different breaks consiting of more than just traditional drum hits. I dunno about the synths...they just sound a bit thick and heavy, I am more into cleaner lighter sounds these days. It's more down to my taste than anything. |
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that's just what i needed to hear. thanks as always, lee. |
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alright the track is now finished. i'm much more pleased with it now. there are still some drill takes, but they are more texture than anything. there are more "squishy" beats here now. |
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