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tune advice please, ta
 

offline phiz from Liverpool (United Kingdom) on 2004-06-03 12:29 [#01221294]
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ow do people,
just been fuckin about with GarageBand and done this tune, i
need ideas on how to spice it up, i'm thinkin its a bit
bland and poorly structured at the moment.

any advice and criticisms appreciated, ta

click here

 

offline r40f from qrters tea party on 2004-06-03 14:47 [#01221443]
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i think the biggest problem is the mix sounds like it's pure
treble. get some other frequencies in there :) personally,
i find you can never really have too much bass.

i think you should get a better snare sound with more of a
pop to it so it stands out better. not crazy about the kick
sound either.

got some good ideas happening, i think the problem is the
production.


 

offline phiz from Liverpool (United Kingdom) on 2004-06-04 11:30 [#01223009]
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cheers r40f,
i've uploaded a different track, that last one still needs
alot of work.
any more comments would be great,
cheers

 

offline nobsmuggler from silly mid-off on 2004-06-04 11:42 [#01223031]
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d/l atm

 

offline Lex from Waterloo (Canada) on 2004-06-04 12:07 [#01223074]
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It's nice, but I think it would be better if the tempo sped
up or slowed down somewhere in the track.

Also, that bass bounce sound could be louder.

 

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