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teapot
from Paddington (Australia) on 2004-05-09 15:23 [#01179836]
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yeah, sorry to bother yall again with my spam, but i really need some thoughts / ideas for this track of mine.
its probably the best track i've (n)ever made and i personally think its in theory my best piece to date
its about 6 months old now and it has been many many differant versions, yet i cant seem to make a good version, and its really frustrating me, as i really want this track to be on my upcoming room40 lp, which the deadline for my album isnt too far away.
so if anybody wants to listen, and give some feedback on where you think it should go/ progress to, or any ideas... would be very much appreciated
thankyou for your time _james
xanpha glassrooms 2 DEMO
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ecnadniarb
on 2004-05-09 16:30 [#01179873]
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Lost ecnadniarb review
yeah, sorry to bother you again with my comments, but I really need to answer your request for feedback on th best track you have (n)ever made.
Stop the static type glitch running through all of the track...maybe use it at the beginning but fade it out and reintroduce it as the lead out of the track. The middle section is really really nice. I like the steady beat the way it is. Make the track about a minute shorter.
I really like it though. It is an excellent track.
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teapot
from Paddington (Australia) on 2004-05-09 16:35 [#01179878]
Points: 5739 Status: Regular | Followup to ecnadniarb: #01179873
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thanks, totally agree on the static hi hat... i liked it at the time i did that version of the track but its gotten old pretty fast... my favorite bit is the piano solo... my best solo evah!
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Ceri JC
from Jefferson City (United States) on 2004-05-09 17:25 [#01179927]
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Yo yo yo James!
See my SS message on a different note (let me know if you didn't get it)
As you know, I've heard this before. I concur on "static issue". Maybe have the piano a bit higher pitched in the intro (an octave up perhaps?) Also, perhaps bring the strings in a bit earlier. The way the piano goes jazzy from 1.35 onwards is awesome though. Definately leave that "as is".
If you want more assistance with this, you know what to do... ;)
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teapot
from Paddington (Australia) on 2004-05-09 18:27 [#01179985]
Points: 5739 Status: Regular | Followup to Ceri JC: #01179927
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yo ceri, got your ss message, i replied before, lemme know if you didnt get it.
thanks for the comments, that octave up idea isnt bad i'll have to try that and see how it sounds... did you hear this version before or was it vers1? that one that sounded like something from a made-for-tv movie hehe
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Ceri JC
from Jefferson City (United States) on 2004-05-09 18:37 [#01179993]
Points: 23533 Status: Moderator | Followup to teapot: #01179985 | Show recordbag
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I checked and I already have the same version (must be from quite a while back, just after xanpha.com went live...) I've also got the glassware ones.
I didn't get your SS message. Bloody Soulseek :/
I'm off to bed now, but this thread is in my favs, so just post here if you like (or email me).
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ecnadniarb
on 2004-05-09 18:38 [#01179996]
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Get a room you two.
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