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hedphukkerr
from mathbotton (United States) on 2004-02-25 18:33 [#01089395]
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got a new song up from my album 'esperanto' called ilo. like the rest of the album, its pretty soundscapish/ambient stuff. review and bash as normal please.
ilo
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hedphukkerr
from mathbotton (United States) on 2004-02-25 18:34 [#01089401]
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oops, i mean the album is called 'paroli' which is esperanto for speak. all the song titles all esperanto btw
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Gwely Mernans
from 23rd century entertainment (Canada) on 2004-02-25 18:35 [#01089402]
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Im really enjoying Manki
what makes your music good is that it has a sort of emotion to it.
allot of the music ive been making lately is thoughtless and empty.
good stuff, ill listen to the rest too.
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horsefactory
from 💠 (United Kingdom) on 2004-02-25 18:35 [#01089404]
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stfu
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hedphukkerr
from mathbotton (United States) on 2004-02-25 18:36 [#01089407]
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thankyou gwely, stfu yourself horse
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Gwely Mernans
from 23rd century entertainment (Canada) on 2004-02-25 18:37 [#01089409]
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The beats that kick in are really awesome too
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hedphukkerr
from mathbotton (United States) on 2004-02-25 18:37 [#01089410]
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in which track?
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Gwely Mernans
from 23rd century entertainment (Canada) on 2004-02-25 18:58 [#01089427]
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Manki
(now listening to others)
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hedphukkerr
from mathbotton (United States) on 2004-02-26 04:53 [#01089794]
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so..... what did you think of them? anyone else up for a go?
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Drunken Mastah
from OPPERKLASSESVIN!!! (Norway) on 2004-02-26 04:58 [#01089805]
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listening now. I will give you a full review featuring my very own meanings about each track when I'm done.
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Drunken Mastah
from OPPERKLASSESVIN!!! (Norway) on 2004-02-26 05:31 [#01089860]
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(taking into consideration that I'm using some old Panasonic headphones)
Ilo: It is a good song. Very long, but it carries itself though. Lots of interesting things going on. Like the different sounds you've used for bringing the melody.
I don't like the "squwip" sounds in your drums, and the drums all seem to come from a little bit to the right... maybe you should spread them a bit more? Also; after the song has gone for two thirds, you should try changing the drum sounds.. try just using the same track, but create another track as well. run the new track through distortion (if you got reason, the scream-distortion on fuzz or electronic (or whatever that is called) setting will make a good second drum-track) to make the drums stay as interesting as the rest of the song.
Manki: Once again, this song has lots of things going on, and I like songs where you don't necessarily hear everything the first time you listen to it (the song still has to be good, though)!
It seems to be off-beat at certain points, though.
Tutaj: First thing that pops into my mind when it starts: "FRUITYLOOPS!" Even if the drums aren't made in fruity, they sound fruity.
you could shorten each part of the song, and it would still work...
Flos: There wasn't all that much going on here.
Raba: I love what you've done to the voice here! (tell me how! please!), but I'm sensing a lack of bass in this song. it probably wouldn't fit into an album all that good.
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hedphukkerr
from mathbotton (United States) on 2004-02-26 08:22 [#01090110]
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thanks alot for the comments, theyre all very helpful. the idea to distort or somehow effect the drums in ilo is a good sudgestion. ive been meaning to fix the off beat drum track for manki. that was some good listening in tutaj because the drums are ideed fruity (as are all the others) but i personally like the sound of them. flos and raba are meant to be kind of transition tracks between the bigger songs. and the voice part in raba is just a vst instrument called "delay lama" which is free somewhere (im sure you can find it on google) and as you can see its very cool sounding.
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