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Jupiter Needs Some Hot Goth Chicks A very floor-friendly tune, very spaced-out with some good acid rhythms for measure. Inspired by a hourlong session of playing the SNES classic, Zombies Ate My Neighbors. Has some cool robot voices and some noise too for measure. Pleasure is a Selective Woman One of the most melodic tracks I've ever written. 135 tempo, with heavy rhythms and pretty melody. I would REALLY like criticism on this one. |
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derwnloading.. that.. second one. |
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thank you muchly! |
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anyone else? eh? eh? |
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ill give one of them a listen. im no good with feedback, but i can tell you if i think its good or bad! |
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ah, leave it to a fellow crazyfungus refugee to not let me down! anyways, whether it's good or not is all i really want to know. :D |
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heh well i listened to pleasure is a selective woman, and i think it was good. it made me bounce around. nice melody! |
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downloading this very minute! |
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thank you sir! and jazembo, i will be compiling your cd tomorrow, but dunno when i can mail it. it will hopefully be this week. btw, how do you plan to pay me the postage? it's probably going to be no more than 5 dollars (US$). |
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two very good tracks, I found Pleasure is a Selective Woman to be more 'danceable' . Both have a great beat and will be worthy entries for the XLTDubmix! I can pay you wil pay pal, nochex, direct fund transfer to your bank account , pigeon mail whichever one is easiest for YOU. |
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wil=with |
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Pleasure is a Selective Woman: Stuttery, not quite on beat or something... interesting... starts to make sense after the layers kick in heavier. Mastering needs some major help, compression on the drums, it's overwhelming the melodies. Although by the way you did this it might have been intended. The drums heavily overwhelm everything though, detracts a lot. That being said though, the drums sound good, nice rythmn, I like the high hat sounds in particular. Whatever effect you used on those is quite nice. Very nice melody in the break, I like the way it comes over. Would like to see something done with it, throw a filter over it or something for a little while and kick up the very maybe. The detuned bass notes fall off that nicely too, a little off kilter like the melody itself, like you didn't quite quantize them all. Very Underworld sound later on. Gets a little too crowded... just using the arpeggio in the end, round 4:15 or whatever, would sound open enough to be really cool, thrown in with a simple melody or something. Like when you come back to it at 4:45 I think the piece would be really good if you reworked it and chopped off a minute or two and made the transitions flow a little bit better, tons of good stuff happening |
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this was pretty nice. i like the way the bass complements the melody at the begining.. it has a sort of off-feeling to it. this seems different than the other stuff i've heard of yours. the percussion for some reason reminds me of the game Doom.. my computer fucked up while downloading so i didn't hear the ending bit. but i liked what i heard. |
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thank you both very much for listening. i appreciate it. :D |
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I'd give you feedback if you didn't put the files on that shitty deadmurder.com page which consistently fails to load on my computer. :( |
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