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offline Gwely Mernans from 23rd century entertainment (Canada) on 2004-01-22 01:34 [#01043687]
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poetry is a hobby of mine when ripped from reality. care to
share?
ill start off with a poem i wrote to the Tobacco Industry
(Imperial Brands)

Behind every factory door,
hides the tight shake of their hand,
unwelcome numbers in a managed system of a set count,
sworn to spill blood for secrecy,
the team moto states.
canasters filled with man made hell,
the wine glass is never empty,
delicious seductive toxins,
fill me with more than meets the eye.
i wont spill a word because my money is with you,
as is my fearsome short numbered life.
thankyou to your industy,
the firm grip of your friendly handshake,
straight faced devil says,
Goodbye bland longevity.
first kiss,
dying candle,
light the lament away,
sorry i only have a few left.

Bryan Berg


 

offline Drunken Mastah from OPPERKLASSESVIN!!! (Norway) on 2004-01-22 01:38 [#01043689]
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cream, cream, poultry
if this wasn't a racecar?
who is/are god
is he a drain?
cream, cream, poultry


 

offline Gwely Mernans from 23rd century entertainment (Canada) on 2004-01-22 01:42 [#01043691]
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-snaps fingers and sips mocha-


 

offline mappatazee from ¨y¨z¨| (Burkina Faso) on 2004-01-22 01:42 [#01043692]
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Gangsta Limeric

Yo niggas can't flex none
Two bitches in da benz not one
When I'm flossin' da ice
Ho's eat my muthafuckin' rice
Dem bitches all say I'm hung.


 

offline Refund from Melbourne (Australia) on 2004-01-22 01:45 [#01043695]
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Church organ like a glass head
Chickin in the corridor,
an apples in the mirror

shut up,.. it abstract, .... you wouldn't understand,


 

offline Gwely Mernans from 23rd century entertainment (Canada) on 2004-01-22 01:48 [#01043696]
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black as night, piercing divine winds,
do you see the moons glaze over the oceans?
the bottomless waters engulfed in darkness,
nevermind the life jacket,
let the life fill your lungs!
Struggle only leads to damnation,
the stars become faint on the oceans ceiling,
translucent mirror..
light is now gone,
only darkness my love.


 

offline Chri5py from my Solarbear (United Kingdom) on 2004-01-22 01:49 [#01043697]
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That's really nice. When did you write it?


 

offline Gwely Mernans from 23rd century entertainment (Canada) on 2004-01-22 01:51 [#01043698]
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Sleep with the electron wires attached to the brain,
then converted into audio, visual aspects of the mind onto a
television screen.
watch the mind of your subject, see their unconscious
unfold,
knowledge of the self prevails through the dream,
Dreamstate upon dreamstate loop, but as for the nothingness
in between,
watch the television screen...



 

offline Gwely Mernans from 23rd century entertainment (Canada) on 2004-01-22 01:52 [#01043699]
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fairly recently


 

offline Gwely Mernans from 23rd century entertainment (Canada) on 2004-01-22 02:05 [#01043709]
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i was listening to basefree after a couple joints and i was
enjoyin a puff out on my padio and i started thinking about
how unhealthy and scary smoking is. basefree captures my
poem about tobacco in a way. in a stoned way i mean.


 

offline REFLEX from Edmonton, Alberta (Canada) on 2004-01-22 02:12 [#01043713]
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the juices I drink are extreemly pink
for the love I share, I have to shave your hair
off your dying head, your death brine is like sweet
raspberry wine, death drink, its so pink!
rotting, bleeding steaming and im so hot that im creaming,
in my pants, ill do a sexy dance to wake the dead, so ill
have sex partner, a dead gardner! ill fuck her ass with a
spade, disembowel a maid, cum on her face and leave her
duaghter her head and you will all say grace.


 

offline REFLEX from Edmonton, Alberta (Canada) on 2004-01-22 02:13 [#01043714]
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hung cabin fever
sodomy of the bounty,
hung for phallacies and hiss and foe,
blacker than the ace of rapes,
no doubt in death desires traits.


 

offline REFLEX from Edmonton, Alberta (Canada) on 2004-01-22 02:15 [#01043715]
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We have arrived
To infest and thrive
Upon billions of lives
With forks and spoons and knives

Repugnant, yet we'll live on your sustenance
Preserve the living-dispose of the dead and diseased

Mortals wined and dined-led to the firing line
As throats are slit-troughs overflow as they bleed

To return what was
Before Eve and Adam
Babylon and Sodom
The trampling foot of man
Men, women and children shall be strung
Sliced from hands to feet
Innards save for a tasty treat
And beaten profusely to tenderize the meat

AAAAAHHHHH! The stench of the populace!
Millions of humans hung upon hooks
Suspended in deep freeze
Subzero, sterile environment
Keeps meat tender and lean
Choice cuts from the slaughter-
Husband, mother, daughter
Dead families kept together
Their hides made into leather
Surprisingly multiple uses for something so useless



 

offline REFLEX from Edmonton, Alberta (Canada) on 2004-01-22 02:17 [#01043717]
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A gigantic grinder
Fused of steel and turbine
Blades flay muscle from bone
Nobody dies alone
As hundreds wait for death
The sound of engines grinding
Every tissue, organ and lining
Explode in a mulch of compost
Churning corkscrews of pain
Razor-sharp gears and cogs
For the creation of human sausage logs
The splattering of meat on flesh
Enzymes, acids and fats
Trickle down into vats
Nightmarish humanoid mower
Behold, the chunk blower



 

offline Gwely Mernans from 23rd century entertainment (Canada) on 2004-01-22 02:19 [#01043718]
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Hunger for your flesh,
Act me a play of satire and submission,
Moan for my ears and strip for my eyes,
Let me tie you up, restraint your humanity,
Your hands can feel me later,
you fell into my trap, show me how you like it.
Not only am i a savage beast to capture and rape you,
I am your bird, rest under my wing and share my warmth,
Althought the savages prey on birds.


 

offline REFLEX from Edmonton, Alberta (Canada) on 2004-01-22 02:20 [#01043719]
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Open Human Head Experiments With Bleach, Lacquer, and
Epoxy


Home laboratory turned mortuary
Experimental transplants and surgery
Using bleach and corrosives to make zombies
Gaping cranium sutured with epoxy
Homemade walking dead
Bumbling retard with scab for a head
Chained to its own crib
Bits of food and pus line its bib
Serum made of bleach and nail polish remover
Tested for speech skills, cognitive, and motor
Mutant strain of human brain dead
My hands-red with curiosity



 

offline REFLEX from Edmonton, Alberta (Canada) on 2004-01-22 02:22 [#01043722]
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Bathing in a Grease Disposal Unit

Big black used grease vat
Spilling over with saturated fats
Ruining my jerky complexion
Month late for due date of collection
The plasma of fast food
Naked in a vat of crude
Eyes roll back in my head
Bathing in a grease disposal unit
Fresh remnants of flesh
Dripping with animal cess



 

offline Gwely Mernans from 23rd century entertainment (Canada) on 2004-01-22 02:25 [#01043724]
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Life is so pleasent!
I could just die here.


 

offline REFLEX from Edmonton, Alberta (Canada) on 2004-01-22 02:27 [#01043726]
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Hypogastric Combustion By C-4 Plastique

We have our ways to make you die
Your request for a pleasant death has been denied

1,000 degrees
disintegration above the knees

C-4 plastique strapped to your chest
Detonation is imminent - a loud, unsightly death
Jammed in your rectum
Duct-taped to your genitals
Detonation is imminent
Flesh is flammable

Within the blackened soil of a human heart
Awaits the bastard to be blown apart...



 

offline Gwely Mernans from 23rd century entertainment (Canada) on 2004-01-22 02:27 [#01043727]
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Taste the smoke of a thousand ciggarettes,
Drink till feelings wash away,
Stay awhile, you dont have to leave just yet,
one more party...

Is the music loud enough?
count how many people are passed out on my lawn,
wheres Waldo?


 

offline Gwely Mernans from 23rd century entertainment (Canada) on 2004-01-22 02:30 [#01043728]
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THE ID-
child confusions,
nervous situations,
sexual.
I am born of those,
under constant development.


 

offline Gwely Mernans from 23rd century entertainment (Canada) on 2004-01-22 02:33 [#01043730]
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metempsychosis exists and is proven,
your parents are in your minds,
and their parents and so forth,
accualations can conquour your fathers,
true being friendship is shared through your parents,
and eventually your long term friends,
sharing thoughts through eachothers minds,
the collective unconscious now exists,
its exists for your thoughts thought it,
only one little step on the mentality ladder,
so many more, so many short dreams with nothingness
followings,
when a dream ends too fast the unconsciousness evokes
nothingness,
your pleasent dream turns nightmare,
and you start to fall down a hole,
this hole that never ends in darkness,
this is us when we die,
i know what death feels like for i have had those
nightmares,
i have fallen into it, i couldnt stay there for long,
i woke up.
my mind could not handle this state,
this state requires no consciousness as a door pass,
do i want to go there?
thats too personal a question to ask,
perpetrating all minds tuition,
pleasent thoughts now children,
dream these dreams ive dreamt for you,
for i am in your minds remember?
true being friendship requires it though..
another connection you see?
get to know me and then i can show you,
stand corrected you see?


 

offline Gwely Mernans from 23rd century entertainment (Canada) on 2004-01-22 02:42 [#01043736]
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whoa, we got some beatnick and some beatdick poems here.
awesome stuff REFLEX



 

offline REFLEX from Edmonton, Alberta (Canada) on 2004-01-22 02:47 [#01043739]
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hahah this topic is awsome.


 

offline REFLEX from Edmonton, Alberta (Canada) on 2004-01-22 14:27 [#01044511]
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no ones got anything good?


 

offline Anus_Presley on 2004-01-22 14:30 [#01044519]
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therre's poetry in everrything i say and do


 

offline Anus_Presley on 2004-01-22 14:30 [#01044521]
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like that HOW FUCKING poetic


 

offline afxNUMB from So.Flo on 2004-01-22 14:32 [#01044523]
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I had a really good one about a guy meeting up with a girl
at a hotel and ----blah blah blah i throw it away. basura!


 

offline knobcheese from Perth (Australia) on 2004-01-22 14:32 [#01044527]
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Stoner haiku

i can't feel my legs
i think there's some urine there
i need some more leaf


 

offline afxNUMB from So.Flo on 2004-01-22 14:49 [#01044539]
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Her hands glazed over my wet body.

She whispered into my ear such words I have never heard from
another woman.

I knees trembled as her hand pressed against my thigh.

Her eyes look up at me, she licks her lips and presses them
against my wet vagina.

My lips tight forbidding any words to escape.

My thighs open allowing this soft woman to enter me.

Finally my mouth opens and lets out a scream of exhaustion.



 

offline horsefactory from 💠 (United Kingdom) on 2004-01-22 15:07 [#01044552]
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I knees trembled ?


 

offline horsefactory from 💠 (United Kingdom) on 2004-01-22 15:08 [#01044554]
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ahahahh REFLEX your poems are wicked


 

offline happy cycling from berlin on 2004-01-22 15:17 [#01044561]
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stoner haiku

was i just thinking
about what i was just thinking
or did i fart glue??


 

offline REFLEX from Edmonton, Alberta (Canada) on 2004-01-22 15:29 [#01044573]
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horsefactory: thanks a million!
this is my fav...

Bathing in a Grease Disposal Unit

Big black used grease vat
Spilling over with saturated fats
Ruining my jerky complexion
Month late for due date of collection
The plasma of fast food
Naked in a vat of crude
Eyes roll back in my head
Bathing in a grease disposal unit
Fresh remnants of flesh
Dripping with animal cess



 

offline tragedy from Gloucester (United States) on 2004-01-22 19:46 [#01044991]
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Fever 103
Pure? What does it mean?
The tongues of hell
Are dull, dull as the triple

Tongues of dull, fat Cerebus
Who wheezes at the gate. Incapable
Of licking clean

The aguey tendon, the sin, the sin.
The tinder cries.
The indelible smell

Of a snuffed candle!
Love, love, the low smokes roll
From me like Isadora's scarves, I'm in a fright

One scarf will catch and anchor in the wheel.
Such yellow sullen smokes
Make their own element. They will not rise,

But trundle round the globe
Choking the aged and the meek,
The weak

Hothouse baby in its crib,
The ghastly orchid
Hanging its hanging garden in the air,

Devilish leopard!
Radiation turned it white
And killed it in an hour.

Greasing the bodies of adulterers
Like Hiroshima ash and eating in.
The sin. The sin.

Darling, all night
I have been flickering, off, on, off, on.
The sheets grow heavy as a lecher's kiss.

Three days. Three nights.
Lemon water, chicken
Water, water make me retch.

I am too pure for you or anyone.
Your body
Hurts me as the world hurts God. I am a lantern ---

My head a moon
Of Japanese paper, my gold beaten skin
Infinitely delicate and infinitely expensive.

Does not my heat astound you. And my light.
All by myself I am a huge camellia
Glowing and coming and going, flush on flush.

I think I am going up,
I think I may rise ---
The beads of hot metal fly, and I, love, I

Am a pure acetylene
Virgin
Attended by roses,

By kisses, by cherubim,
By whatever these pink things mean.
Not you, nor him.

Not him, nor him
(My selves dissolving, old whore petticoats) ---
To Paradise.



 

offline The_Funkmaster from St. John's (Canada) on 2004-01-22 19:51 [#01044998]
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I only write haiku's!!

the rain falls tonight
the sadness crawls to the floor
both dry with the sun


 

offline The_Funkmaster from St. John's (Canada) on 2004-01-22 19:53 [#01045002]
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that, by the way, is a funkmaster original! ;)


 

offline dariusgriffin from cool on 2004-01-22 19:57 [#01045004]
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Fuck it, I'll just paste that one I wrote in another
thread.

Night is black
Black as my soul,
Black as a dead crow
That lies on the body
Of my ex-wife
Who stole my soul
And painted it black
Black as the night
That is black as my soul
Baby won't you dance with me
Oh yeah let's party


 

offline tragedy from Gloucester (United States) on 2004-01-22 19:58 [#01045005]
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i like it!


 

offline roygbivcore from Joyrex.com, of course! on 2004-01-22 20:20 [#01045023]
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please,from now on, nobody post your poetry. it will only
allienate you further.


 

offline REFLEX from Edmonton, Alberta (Canada) on 2004-01-22 23:24 [#01045152]
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fuck... i feel like puking.


 

offline Q4Z2X on 2004-01-23 00:06 [#01045175]
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glorious anthropoidal-arthropods (inne om grotta)

i am just a hulking, fuckin’ ape
just waiting to be poached
slaughtered, for no reason

these feelings may never leave
this dense, thick troglodyte brow of mine

if they do, they become injured

they are not meant to live on their own

they've never known the feeling of freedom

and wish for it to stay that way

i would not propagate
to sustain my species

i will anathematise myself

gloriously


 

offline Gwely Mernans from 23rd century entertainment (Canada) on 2004-01-23 01:48 [#01045252]
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tragedy: great poem


 

offline Gwely Mernans from 23rd century entertainment (Canada) on 2004-01-23 02:28 [#01045274]
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my carpet turns to an ocean of waves,
the walls deforming their geometrics,
thoughts wander around this bedroom interior,
thoughts I care not to discuss.

straight faced tear drenched manifestations,
clear minded epiphany shines on the sharp end of the blade,
when familiarity loses its gleam in the mirror I stare
into,
so many incarnations to become and yet presentable persona
leeches.

digging into my flesh, i dont mind its not mine anymore,
a faceless wonder.
love to touch hate to share,
care has its wear and is an unfamiliar fit.

A head full of cobwebs, vacany signs are up,
let me taste your face before im lost,
before the taste grows to lust for your digestion in me,
edible lovers turn carpets to oceans,
and self handed over to my lurking residents.


 

offline Gwely Mernans from 23rd century entertainment (Canada) on 2004-01-23 02:43 [#01045285]
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sleeping in eachother, submissing thoughts.
pierce my eyes, see into this facade known as me,
beyond the dense latterns lighting the way,
sacred path to the primordial emotions i stricken from you.

why must i turn away from your enchanting glare,
absorbing eyes encompassing my being,
a soul for every sight under delightful blackness in our
sky,
take me, i was not cut out to be the taker.


 

offline Gwely Mernans from 23rd century entertainment (Canada) on 2004-01-23 02:44 [#01045287]
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im sharing too much now.



 

offline REFLEX from Edmonton, Alberta (Canada) on 2004-01-23 02:54 [#01045290]
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sharing wayyyyyy too much there pal. haha.. just kidding its
not bad. I need more bathing in grease disposal unit poems.


 

offline Gwely Mernans from 23rd century entertainment (Canada) on 2004-01-23 02:56 [#01045293]
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i share because i care.

acually i share because i dont care :p


 

offline Anus_Presley on 2004-01-23 08:56 [#01045742]
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haikus borre me to shrreads


 

offline dariusgriffin from cool on 2004-01-23 08:57 [#01045745]
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Do you have a livejournal, Gwely Mernans ?


 


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