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this is my first track, plz comment on stuff |
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pretty cool sounding, youve got a nice start. the beats (if thats what you wanna call them) are a little off in the timing. sometimes that can be good, but in this case if just doesnt sound right. also, the whole track sounds a bit muffled. you should prolly up the treble in whatever program youre using and that wouid make it sound alot fuller. |
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yea, i noticed the timing and lack of treble, after i exproted. damn tinny ass speakers i have are shite |
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I enjoy the sound waves in the start of the song, try to put some variation within them possibly. well it seems as if that IS the whole song, you should try to expand on the main idea. mabye since its your first song try to add a little bead, or if you want to keep it ambient throw down another ambient track within the song to give it some depth. |
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