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Raz0rBlade_uk
on 2003-12-23 13:17 [#01003319]
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Hey all. Long time no see ey. I spent some time on this track and I desperately want some ppl to listen. I made a first version and was told it was not good enough so I worked on it a lot more. Please please make your comments as I love you all so very much, especially at this time of year. Merry Christmas to all!
polycry_ii_xmix
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Spikee Dragon
from Newcastle (United Kingdom) on 2003-12-23 13:59 [#01003356]
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The second synth that comes in at the start is a bit off to my ears, a bit playstationy, but the first one is great and the track is constructed nicely. Didn't bust into anything, just echoes deeper but still sounds enjoyable. I like the effects you get on that first synth the most, nice atmosphere to the whole track. Best I can do for you.
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evolume
from seattle (United States) on 2003-12-23 14:25 [#01003381]
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nothing much happens in this track. it doesn't really do anything for me. it needs some more changes or something. something other than just that 3 chord progression. more layers, melody or something. build up to something and let it explode into some kind of climax, i don't know. sounds kinda nice i guess, but it gets boring after about a minute.
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promo
from United Kingdom on 2003-12-23 14:46 [#01003407]
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Raz0rBlade_uk,
Interesting use of notes dude. They are literally identical to the notes I've use on this track
The Bro - But I don't live in Detroit, Chicago or Sheffie...
But I'm going to have to say I do like the notes you've used a lot. I agree there isn't much progression but 'cause the notes are strong I think you're doing a good thing. These are definitely my kinda notes. More progression would be good though.
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Raz0rBlade_uk
on 2003-12-23 15:06 [#01003438]
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Omg! promo, the notes are identical, that's freaky lol.
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promo
from United Kingdom on 2003-12-23 15:07 [#01003441]
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Yeah I know it is isn't it! Looks like we have a slightly similar approach.
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promo
from United Kingdom on 2003-12-23 15:09 [#01003447]
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Raz0rBlade_uk,
What happened was I remixed your track and you remixed mine. Actually mine is about 1.5 years old so I think I have actual ownership on those notes. Lol.
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Raz0rBlade_uk
on 2003-12-23 15:09 [#01003448]
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I would enjoy listening to yor collection some time.
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qrter
from the future, and it works (Netherlands, The) on 2003-12-23 15:10 [#01003450]
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you both also end your posts with lol.
wow.
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Raz0rBlade_uk
on 2003-12-23 15:11 [#01003452]
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dammit, lol. some one in the medievil could hav thought up the notes, ya never know.
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Raz0rBlade_uk
on 2003-12-23 15:12 [#01003455]
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qrter, u listened to the track yet?
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promo
from United Kingdom on 2003-12-23 15:15 [#01003460]
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Well I think they are good solid notes thats why I used them in the first place.
Raz0rBlade_uk check this track out this is one of my most popular
The Bro - Can't remember what its called be as honest as you wish.
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ecnadniarb
on 2003-12-23 15:15 [#01003461]
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I would listen but my face has just fallen off taking my ears with it.
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Raz0rBlade_uk
on 2003-12-23 15:18 [#01003466]
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am downloading yor track promo
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hyakusen
from 8=============> on 2003-12-23 15:20 [#01003471]
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i like it a lot - melodic lines fit great into beat, and the bass is nice - not too strong - this is what i caal "well balanced product"
nice work - post more
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Spikee Dragon
from Newcastle (United Kingdom) on 2003-12-23 15:24 [#01003480]
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That melody is simple enough 4/4 so if you own the notation about 1,000,000 musicians owe you royalties promo. Contact the mcps quick! :>
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handoverthecart
on 2003-12-23 15:35 [#01003490]
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i agree with evolume. everything is nice and clean but it just doesn't seem to go anywhere.
by the way promo and Raz0rBlade_uk, i also made a song with very similar notes to this one about a year ago. lol :P
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promo
from United Kingdom on 2003-12-23 15:36 [#01003492]
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Spikee Dragon,
I'm just fooling around you know. I know my notes aren't original. :-)
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evolume
from seattle (United States) on 2003-12-23 15:36 [#01003493]
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i like promo's track a little better, but i'm not sure i'm down with some of the noises used.. like that flatulent bass line at the end. but some of the other noises are kinda neat. beats are dancy. so the ladies probably can shake their thang to it.
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evolume
from seattle (United States) on 2003-12-23 15:39 [#01003496]
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probably all notes were discovered upon invention of the first stringed instrument, or at least upon the first breath to pass through a slide whistle.
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Spacecadet
on 2003-12-23 15:39 [#01003497]
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for me sound creation is paramount to do a melody justice, sometimes i think (no offence) that the sounds used are a little flat and digital (this is down to my personal taste but analog style sounds are richer and more plesant)
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Spikee Dragon
from Newcastle (United Kingdom) on 2003-12-23 15:48 [#01003508]
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I was fooling about too so I'm glad you take it as such however I think originality has nothing to do with anything. You can do a riff on a guitar and think 'shit, that sounds like…' but by the time you record the whole piece it will sound totally different. It's easy to cover the same ground again and again in music but nothing wrong with that if the ground is good and u don't just plain rip or diss, all music is appreciated by someone as all tastes differ + got to start someplace. u won't be a jedi overnight.
I had one of your tracks on a mix cd promo, a room full of my mates got to hear it last weekend. nothing was said but cool yea? :>
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Raz0rBlade_uk
on 2003-12-23 16:18 [#01003535]
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I like this track promo. There are many good things to say about it. Like the beats fit almost perfectly with the tune and the effects are introduced very well. I feel that we have a very similar approach, cos I can imagine making this song. There is one thing I might argue, is there could be a tiny bit more depth, it feels like I'm hearing the song off a piece of paper. That's not a dis to the song, cos it's cool. Nice job anywayz
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Raz0rBlade_uk
on 2003-12-23 16:36 [#01003564]
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Quick, more listeners, before this thread dies, and die it will.
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promo
from United Kingdom on 2003-12-23 18:10 [#01003641]
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Shall I bump it? Oh woops I've done that.
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CS2x
from London (United Kingdom) on 2003-12-23 18:16 [#01003650]
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I don't like this too much to be honest. I find the chords and melody too repetitive and it doesn't go anywhere.
Nice production, mind.
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