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look i made a new track. and i want you to listen.
 

offline handoverthecart on 2003-11-21 19:14 [#00960677]
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yes i am once again spamming the board with my music, im
sorry. this one doesn't have a name right now, and its sort
of minimal and ambient maybe, whatever that means. im
hoping this thread gets at least 2 replys from people who
are not me. your feedback is very much appreciated.

an untitled track

thank you for listening, and im really sorry


 

offline weatheredstoner from same shit babes. (United States) on 2003-11-21 19:57 [#00960722]
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starts out SAW2'ish, then da beat kicks in. I like the sound
effects, and whispering voices. Needs something a bit more
to help it progress throughout the 4 minutes. I would keep
the same beat you have now, but just give it some different
sounds and beef it up a bunch.

Dont sweat it, this is the last place to apologize for
spamming your track. I hope.


 

offline handoverthecart on 2003-11-21 19:59 [#00960724]
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any one care to listen?


 

offline handoverthecart on 2003-11-21 19:59 [#00960725]
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haha sorry, i guess i didn't refresh for a while


 

offline handoverthecart on 2003-11-21 20:00 [#00960727]
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and that you for listening! :D


 

offline r40f from qrters tea party on 2003-11-21 20:07 [#00960735]
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it's pretty good. it could definitely use some more
variations, although not necessarily more sounds. for
example, you could stop the melody for a while or change up
the beat a bit. the track is off to a very good start,
though.


 

offline Skink from A cesspool in eden on 2003-11-21 21:14 [#00960791]
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I'm in the process of downloading it so i will let you know
in a bit.


 

offline Skink from A cesspool in eden on 2003-11-21 21:20 [#00960798]
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I tought that was pretty good but i agree with the others,
it needs more to it a little variation and maybe some more
sounds.

It was still chilling though.

: )


 

offline godataloss from Cleveland (United States) on 2003-11-21 21:25 [#00960799]
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very nice

simple yet elegant

like the squeaky noise

pickin up the tempo a bit -nice-

not too much- good- nice break


jammmin now! Got me rummaging for a rom
now............uhuh...............a word would be nice now
(insert yer title)......need a bridge..........it wants to
bust out.....
no
ending.
nice squelching. all thank you.
-yer welcome for the real-time review


 

offline handoverthecart on 2003-11-21 21:58 [#00960815]
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wow four people listened, thats like a record or something
for me. thanks to all of you!


 

offline plaidzebra from so long, xlt on 2003-11-21 23:21 [#00960853]
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i'll try to remember to get back to this thread over the
next couple of days, i don't have time to d/l tonight and
i've never heard your tracks before.

also, show a little backbone. : ) what use is an electronic
music community without a willingness to share one's time
and feedback?


 

offline weatheredstoner from same shit babes. (United States) on 2003-11-21 23:29 [#00960856]
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indeed.


 

offline nobsmuggler from silly mid-off on 2003-11-22 05:58 [#00960974]
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its good track the melodys alone would be excelent
soundtrack music

but (and there always is one) i think the beats need to be
crisper with more variation


 


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