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handoverthecart
on 2003-11-21 19:14 [#00960677]
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yes i am once again spamming the board with my music, im sorry. this one doesn't have a name right now, and its sort of minimal and ambient maybe, whatever that means. im hoping this thread gets at least 2 replys from people who are not me. your feedback is very much appreciated.
an untitled track
thank you for listening, and im really sorry
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weatheredstoner
from same shit babes. (United States) on 2003-11-21 19:57 [#00960722]
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starts out SAW2'ish, then da beat kicks in. I like the sound effects, and whispering voices. Needs something a bit more to help it progress throughout the 4 minutes. I would keep the same beat you have now, but just give it some different sounds and beef it up a bunch.
Dont sweat it, this is the last place to apologize for spamming your track. I hope.
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handoverthecart
on 2003-11-21 19:59 [#00960724]
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any one care to listen?
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handoverthecart
on 2003-11-21 19:59 [#00960725]
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haha sorry, i guess i didn't refresh for a while
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handoverthecart
on 2003-11-21 20:00 [#00960727]
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and that you for listening! :D
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r40f
from qrters tea party on 2003-11-21 20:07 [#00960735]
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it's pretty good. it could definitely use some more variations, although not necessarily more sounds. for example, you could stop the melody for a while or change up the beat a bit. the track is off to a very good start, though.
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Skink
from A cesspool in eden on 2003-11-21 21:14 [#00960791]
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I'm in the process of downloading it so i will let you know in a bit.
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Skink
from A cesspool in eden on 2003-11-21 21:20 [#00960798]
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I tought that was pretty good but i agree with the others, it needs more to it a little variation and maybe some more sounds.
It was still chilling though.
: )
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godataloss
from Cleveland (United States) on 2003-11-21 21:25 [#00960799]
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very nice
simple yet elegant
like the squeaky noise
pickin up the tempo a bit -nice-
not too much- good- nice break
jammmin now! Got me rummaging for a rom now............uhuh...............a word would be nice now (insert yer title)......need a bridge..........it wants to bust out.....
no ending. nice squelching. all thank you. -yer welcome for the real-time review
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handoverthecart
on 2003-11-21 21:58 [#00960815]
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wow four people listened, thats like a record or something for me. thanks to all of you!
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plaidzebra
from so long, xlt on 2003-11-21 23:21 [#00960853]
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i'll try to remember to get back to this thread over the next couple of days, i don't have time to d/l tonight and i've never heard your tracks before.
also, show a little backbone. : ) what use is an electronic music community without a willingness to share one's time and feedback?
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weatheredstoner
from same shit babes. (United States) on 2003-11-21 23:29 [#00960856]
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indeed.
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nobsmuggler
from silly mid-off on 2003-11-22 05:58 [#00960974]
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its good track the melodys alone would be excelent soundtrack music
but (and there always is one) i think the beats need to be crisper with more variation
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