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A track Im working on... its not finished, but I wanted to see what you all thought... and if you have any suggestions thanks! |
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*Downloading... |
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ditto |
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sweet. lemme know your guys' thoughts. :) |
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it's cool, the part at 1:05 where it's just the beat, it seems kind of like it doesn't need to be there. there's a lot of parts where i just feel like there needs to be more going on but then again i like my music around 200+bpm |
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i'll take a listen - could you return the favor and listen to my new jazz stuff on the board? |
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yeah, i REALLY like this - i like those subtle oddballs samples that are scattered all about - the beat is great too. and as usual, your stuff has fantastic melody - lots of good textures too. fantastic as usual. =D |
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i like this shit |
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tune sounds like a lazy absynth poop |
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It's okay but what are you trying to communicate to the listener? Do you want them to be excited by you, non different or something else? |
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just setting a mood. Take from it what you will :) |
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i accidentally posted this in Roygbivcore's thread but: zeus, this song is huge. it sounds really big. reminds me of NIN or something, however remotely. If i had anything to suggest, it would be to add some kinda vocal. some sweet fem vocals.. or no.. wait.. like some low volume death metal vocals. like in the background eq'd to sound like wax paper on a comb. like some guy screaming but low enough volume so that you can barely make out the lyrics kinda shit. or some real slow heavy distortion scratching. some call and response style stuff. anywho, that's what i'd do. |
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this is trippy as fuck. i enjoy it muchly. |
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i don't know why, but this vaguely reminds me of "at the heart of it all". anyway, sounds good. sort of unsettling for a "downtempo" track, but thats probably my boards of canada saturated ears talking. |
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sweet :) Im glad you guys dig this! yeah, I think vocals would work on this too. It would be funny if all my songs ended up having vocals on them (my last track is for vocals, although I havnt gotten anyone to sing yet) But yeah, cool :) Thanks again |
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It's fantastic. Granted, that's almost the norm with Thor, uh, I mean, Zeus. But for once, I not Celcus, speak the truth. Shit, I can rhyme. Maybe the only song that you've recorded that deserves comparison to Fragile - era NIN. |
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Again, I'm frustrated because my fuckwad computer is defaulted to RealPlayer. |
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thanks man! :-D |
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Zeus, fuck, if there's a way that I could donate audio, I'd go apeshit at the chance to provide 'vocal textures'. Or actual singing. |
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:) ill keep that in mind when I get it more finished up |
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I could sing too, ya know ! Now I just need to prove it... |
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Beatboxing, aural deconstructions, guitar loops, falsettos, synth sub - bass melodies, drone... ...my only problem: a decent connection + modest computer + limited resources - infinite time = my shitty lack of music making opportunities. |
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Oh I LOVE the fucking percussion and the rumbley bass, and the creepy subtle melody. Excellent. It's downtempo, but it's not chill. One of my favorites yet by Zoose. |
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thanks man :) |
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this song is good. what are you going to do to finish it? |
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Ha, the drums and rhythmic noises kinda remind me of Money by Pink Floyd, except waaaay creepier. Shambling undead cyborg creepier. You're doing catchier stuff these days, like it. |
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Like it.... I wasn't too keen on some of your ealier pieces but you're really pulling together some good work now. I know you don't need the big head but, you're one of the artists on here that will usually come up with the goods for me in the music dept. ;) |
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i think it's a good track, although its not really my style |
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fuck: not sure yet... I gonna listen to it a bit more, see if anyone suggests anything cool... but do know that I want to add alittle variation to the drums (kick hithat snare... not the sound effecty ones. fleet: "Shambling undead cyborg creepier. " hahah sweet :) thanks! chri5py: thanks man :) it means alot! wizard: thanks for listening! :) |
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Haven't heard any Zeus material in quite the while! I will check this out! |
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I liked it! Is was slower but not too slow. I didn't lose any attention and was focused on the structure of the song. Turned out quite well! |
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thanks man :) |
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this is a really cool track! i love the melody. i kept expecting vsnares-esque horror clips. |
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I enjoyed the noizy noises, ya know, the ones that fit with the beat. Waaht, sttshhh, do, do, waaht, shee, do, aht teek... |
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most improved artist goes to Zeus.. stuff just keeps geting better in my opinion. i tend to judge based on whether or not i'd listen to these songs- and for the past couple of tracks i find myself going back to them for a listen- def on my playlist! |
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sweet :) Thanks guys! |
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I've noticed that your style seems to mainly consist of slow hip-hop type beats with lots of atmospherics. A bit of BOC and Dj Shadow. Always chill, so doing crazy drill beats is out of the question, but I really like what you did with this one. The thing most artists (including myself) seem to have is a lack of interest in the songs. I really dug your track but after 2 min it just didn't keep my interest. Its okay to milk your sounds throughout the track but you have to do it wisely. I highly suggest listening to Bola (who is a architectural genuis with music, imo). Its seems that most of Bolas tracks rely on the individual sounds 90% of the time, and actual arrangements for the other 10%. But I've also notice that you are definately more of a composer/arranger (or at least have great potential to be) so definatly take a look at your track and ask if you need a different formula, rather than verse, chorus, verse, chorus (not saying that you do this, just using it as an example.), figure out ways to incorporate some chord changes along with it. Melody changes are a great way to keep a listeners interest. Consult some Ilkae for good examples of chord changes and atmospheric sound construction. I'm blazed so I hope that I didn't come off as an arrogant ass. Good luck. |
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nah man, that wasnt arrogent, it was good advice :) thanks! |
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