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KainiIndustries
from over the roof floats billy on 2003-10-13 20:25 [#00901265]
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that I care to let the rest of the world hear.
I know it's a bit derivative... how can I improve it? Answers on a postcard =oD
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ambsace
from canaDUH. on 2003-10-13 20:43 [#00901268]
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it gets a bit repetative, the floaty-bell thing throughout...(it's a bit high and kinda gets a bit annoying-ish, i think. just hurts my ears), but i think that for a first track? this is excellent. nicely done.
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ecnadniarb
on 2003-10-13 21:05 [#00901275]
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Just sounds like a bunch of random loops :D
It's OK I suppose, but it lacks structure...the deeper strings have really nice melody going on...if you developed this, maybe added a beat...it could be a killer of a track. :D
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