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I was amazed, when i posted this for some time ago. I actually got some pretty constructive critisism!!! So here we go again http://www.tegnebordet.dk/default.asp?vis=thumbs&id=4075 Check it out =) |
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i cant understand a shit of that site :) they are nice.. i like one best i cant tell you anything usefull tho |
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oh my, Johannes.. impressed. your technique is very good... i remember that i saw some of your earlier pics htat i didn't like very much, but these do have depth. and i can see some vespertinism... |
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wow, well done man, i like your style. i can't really give constructive criticism, i just want to compliment you on your work :) shouldn't be done yet though, it sais '30 okt 2003' :P |
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thank you. THANK YOU! I cant say, i havent worked hard for this. I want to do something creative with my life, and i just want to learn learn LEARN!!! So i really appreciate you'r response to this! ?= Thanks a lot =)=)=)=) |
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Wow, what a strange error!!!! |
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Very good! Impressed! I also like the one JAroen mentioned best. |
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One of them is signed oktober 30 2003? Nice stuff there. |
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Fuck dude, good stuff ! |
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I'ts because i'm ahead of my time! No seriusly, i dont know why i did that! Fucked up. |
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I like em, especially those 6 little big-bellied cartoon guys, very cool. I'm not usually a fan of tight realist drawings but these are pretty cool, they look quite intense. Keep up the good work man, it cheers me to see creative people :-) |
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wow!, your the mother fucking king, i love all your work.....post some of your stuff on if you havent already done so |
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same crits from me as last time. are you working from photo references? i'm guessing you are. it might help to ditch that and start learning how to construct a figure from the skeleton up, because it doesn't quite seem like you've got your anatomy down, especially if these are off photos. also, if they are from photos, the lighting can be really off because a portrait photograph, especially professional ones, tend to have very high contrast, unrealistic lighting set up. loosen up your lines a bit and focus more on anatomy, plus the drawings are too dark, as i think i said in your last topic. keep drawing! |
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the spooky portrait one is kind of cool, if it were finished and her hair didn't look like a solid mat. i guess you're going for realism, but some of it is actually less realistic because of how contrasty the drawings look. |
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if you really want to get grilled, post your work in this forum: www.artbq.com/forum/ the posters there are almost all pros, working in either illustration or comic books. it isn't like alot of places where they either say "hey great!" or "pretty good, keep it up". most of those types of sites are filled with people who draw as a hobby but don't actually know what the hell they're talking about. kind of like ninety percent of the people on deviantart.... anyways, if you want more feedback here, i'll certainly give it to you. i'm currently an art major, digital arts, although i'm thinking about changing that to illustration. |
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check out these links for inspiration/tutorials, what have you. and sorry, i don't know html, so you'll have to copy paste. www.conceptart.org - definitely the best forum around www.beeba.net - this guy draws like crazy and has mad figure drawing skills www.goodbrush.com www.amanosworld.com plus try to get your hands on the andrew loomis figure drawing books, which are the best available. |
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Zaphod, i would have sent you a mail, because i felt i had so much to say! Well first of all, i have begun redrawing one of the pictures, without the errors you mentioned. I don't know why i dont see it myself, but thats just the way it sometimes. Your comments make me feel like "what?!" in the begining, and then after some time, i see that you're right. So THANK YOU YET AGAIN!!! And that link, i have a feeling ill use that site from now on, to haul in critique! Wery useful. =) And last, i do use photo references, its simply what my budget can handle right now. I only have one girl that voluntered to pose nude for me, for free! And i want to be good, before i use her. But i have recently begun drawing myself, and some kids at my job, and i can see what the fuzz is about. Copying photos is difficult enough, but kind of a monkey job, whereas the real study of the human body is much more complex, and generates more interesting results. I have also begun with some cross hatching and water colours and stuff. Anyway, i just wanted to say, thanks for the enligtening critique, it really helps me! Dont be surprised if i use you again. |
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love the one JAroen mentioned. to me, the expression on the face is childishly demonic |
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this shit rocks!!! What a talented man! |
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check out mine too ! (if someone wanna use one of my pic just ask me) www.glass-eater.deviantart.com the site is pretty simple in fact, just clic on gallery on that page and youll see all my thumbnails |
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oh and, nice stuff indeed dirty priest! |
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if you want, i know of places to get figure drawing books for free. i know hiring a model is super expensive, which is why i just draw stuff without any reference at all, or with a model in figure drawing classes. you should really begin drawing with no references, it helps you to build up skill, and in the real world, there aren't usually models there for you to draw from, its just a guy going "hey, draw such and such in this style, have it by this date", and then thats it. are you planning on doing illustration, comics, what exactly are you into? i'm beginning to write and illustrate comics in my spare time, which is quite a test of drawing skill and compositional ability. |
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i really need to make a portfolio site sometime, because i have no where to post my work at the moment. |
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Please tell me about those places!! (i like things that are free) I think ill probably do either illustration or animation. I really don't know yet. But i have a friend who's a full blown animator who gave me some tips (Betty Edwards for example.. i'd never heard of her!!). He explained the pros and cons for it, and i think i might be interested. I might even be interested in computer games (graphics, animation). I also considered teaching part time and doing your own shit. I dont know yet, i just want to be good, get into a some kind of school that will suit my needs. Learning the classical style is just a good basic before i move on to something else, i'd think. |
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I did a self portrait with some cross hatching here: http://www.tegnebordet.dk/default.asp?vis=profil&id=4075 I really like this myself, i think its much more vivid and interesting than the other stuff! |
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http://www.fineart.sk/anat.htm |
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