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nobsmuggler
from silly mid-off on 2003-09-29 13:24 [#00882859]
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the tracks are 80'slove and anaotyherboc
comments please thnx
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Q4Z2X
on 2003-09-29 14:03 [#00882903]
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80s love - nice synths.. kinda sounds like ninja turtles video game music.. which is nice.. the percussion is interesting.. it sorta sounds like someone is making those sounds with their mouth.. it could be longer and change up more as it progresses.. but i'd say it's a good start for a track.. i think the track needs to keep going and reach some type of climax or something.. just my thoughts..
but this is a nice track overall..
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nobsmuggler
from silly mid-off on 2003-09-29 14:14 [#00882925]
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thnx im bit stuck with it atm i wanted to take it further and but i didnt want spoil it i couldnt come up with something better to go with/over it
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nobsmuggler
from silly mid-off on 2003-09-30 00:31 [#00883482]
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ahh come on i always try and comment on yours
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tibbar
from harrisburg, pa (United States) on 2003-09-30 00:38 [#00883486]
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both tracks are very nice. you've got a good sense of melody and texture. the only negative critique i have is that they are short. now coming from me, that sounds slightly hipocritical (have 1 minute songs and all)... but i think these pieces could each go somewhere quiet farther. they are quiet nice, however. looking forawrd to hearing more.
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nobsmuggler
from silly mid-off on 2003-09-30 11:25 [#00884166]
Points: 6265 Status: Addict | Followup to tibbar: #00883486
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thnx im uploading a better version of 80's love within the next half hour ill bump this when its done :)
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tibbar
from harrisburg, pa (United States) on 2003-09-30 11:26 [#00884170]
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cool beans, i need to dl it.
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ecnadniarb
on 2003-09-30 11:31 [#00884188]
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You are deffo improving. I liked the anaotyherboc one...only problem is that it is too obvious what you have used in the track to make it. I reckon you need to go more experimentalist with Reason.
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evolume
from seattle (United States) on 2003-09-30 11:34 [#00884193]
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i wasn't really "feeling" the 80s love track. i think i just didn't care for the main synth sound. but the other track, anaotyherboc, i really liked. very nice, subtle, and over all quite pleasant. good length too. just cuz a track is low key, don't mean it has to go on for 6 minutes, a mistake that many folks make i'd say.
yeh, i'll listen to the newer version of 80's love if i got some time today.
good wark muh man!
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nobsmuggler
from silly mid-off on 2003-09-30 11:56 [#00884219]
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thnx peeps the newer version is up
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evolume
from seattle (United States) on 2003-09-30 12:23 [#00884241]
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i really like the melodic string sound and the knocky clicky beats. it sounds like you raised the level of that stuff a bit..? it's a good track i'm just not a fan of that metal plate sounding synth pad noise. it definately sounds better than before though. yeh, good track i likes it.
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nobsmuggler
from silly mid-off on 2003-09-30 12:58 [#00884281]
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thnx evo i thought it sounded like it had more development with out taking the 'shine' off of it
i had trouble with the levels on the metal plate noise i think thats where it raised it too much
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