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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2003-09-18 09:26 [#00868619]
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The Rite
We held her hand as she slow submerged, releasing her to the water green. We watched her sink into the darkness, becoming daughter life unseen.
We turned away with bodies weary, walked from the ancient river's edge. We threshed our corn and sank our hope into the rite of yielding flesh.
We danced that night with debauches wild, escaping thought and guilt of death. We greeted dawn with tired limbs, and tilled our fields with tired breath.
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pOgO
from behind your belly button fluff on 2003-09-18 09:32 [#00868629]
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That sounds like your describing a funeral
V good =oD
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mylittlesister
from ...wherever (United Kingdom) on 2003-09-18 09:37 [#00868637]
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hmmm..... abortion :-/
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mylittlesister
from ...wherever (United Kingdom) on 2003-09-18 09:38 [#00868639]
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yeah, does sound like a funeral actually!
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2003-09-18 10:01 [#00868663]
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it's not about abortion, jack
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recycle
from Where is Phobiazero (Lincoln) (United States) on 2003-09-18 11:42 [#00868866]
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i like it paul
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Tussle Toss
from United States on 2018-03-04 21:53 [#02545787]
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sad but nice
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2018-03-04 23:44 [#02545792]
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Oh god, I wrote that after reading The Golden Bough.
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