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can I get your opinion? its not done yet... still got more to add... but yeah thanks! |
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(it buids up... so if it sounds like silence at first... its cause it will get louder!) |
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streaming? |
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This track sucks, I turned it on and there was nothing but silence so I turned this shit off, wtf |
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lol |
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God damn, that's a big file. Sorry, I'm on 56k. |
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jk...... I like it, but as far as constructive criticism...don't look at me. Although I think the keyboard sound things are a little cheesy....? |
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Yeah sorry, 8 MB takes forver to dload on my shitty ISDN connection |
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you mean the one thats doing triplets? |
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cool. it's the neverending story when they're looking at the 2nd gate (the two giant statues that shoot lazers)... you just find choir voices on the net and loop them to produce the continuous tone? The melody that comes in near 3:00 doesn't really add to it in a positive way, nor the beat that comes in later. At the 4 min mark it's becoming irritating wondering what the remaining 4 minutes will be like, instead of having fun enjoying as they unfold. Eh, it's not that bad, the sounds working together grow on you as they fade away. Now something else is starting up in some sort of finale I guess. There's quite a lot of time spend fading out from the last part and then from this part, that's a large chunk of the track. But I guess it does add to it's character. Your grade is 1b7 out of a total of 1yy points. |
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hahah, I havnt seen the never ending story in forever! so no, there isnt a sample ;) 1b7... sweet! thanks for checking it out... sorry you didnt like it that much... :-\ |
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what do you think of the lexaunculpt track I posted about 10 posts below? |
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listening now... I like it who is it? are they from this board? |
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No. It's lexaunculpt (they made "blurring of trees" on ... planet mu?) |
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ah sweet |
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Sorry man, but that Track isnt very good, not that i could make a better track...but....it sounds like you used some really cheesy preset sounds for that Bassline, the percussion is adding nothing to the track, maybe you should put some kind of clap, on the 5 & 13, and get RID of that aweful choir.....yeah, and last but not least you should download L'usine ICL - Iron city |
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damn... no one likes this track... even my roommates dont like it... yeah, its kinda cheesy... but cheesy can be fun :-D :-\ Hehe ah well... thanks for listening |
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Subtlety... totally lacks subtlety The fade is fairly dramatic from the beginning to when it gets to it's loudest. Would be more effective if you made it more gradual, started louder, and gained volumn. Same with the fade at the end, beginnings and endings are tough. Actually in this case I think some really sudden changes, something heavy coming out of nowhere, would be neat as long as it TOTALLY changed the mood of the piece for a while. The panning on the arpeggio'd plucked sound, not subtle, not interesting, basic going back and forth. No real big changes happening, repeats a little too much, no fun effects mania, etc You have foundation for a good track, but obviously a ton of work to do. Some melodies, more variation, whatever comes to mind. Shelf it and come back when you feel like you have a fresh perspective? The mastering is pretty good, especially when all the parts get there. I like the bass line with the bass drum, the sort of walking stand up bass jazz line, ala Royksopp, works really well with the bass drum. It's catchy. |
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thanks for listening, and thanks for the advice :) |
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