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do any of you write short stories? I really love reading them... and writing them. |
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oh i'm writing one in my head right now it's pretty much just you and me fucking untill we need wheelchairs. ohh baby yes |
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I like writing myself into romance novels and then listening to them in text to speach programs. |
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I started getting into writing short stories in my old english classes... since then i've just grown attached to it... I seem to write about old people a lot.. im not too sure why. |
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I, am serious, I write shortstories... Should write something bigger one day, good at it. If you want to read something I've done, you can't =( the stuff is in Swedish... THis is a site (which is like a short story, I use a lot of symbolism in it though) I've made for a University project: nice pictures there though ;) |
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old folks sure are funny. |
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I, was also serious. |
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damnit.. i'd love to read it. damnit... change it! not so much funny.. more depressing. |
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i'm so glad you didn't take me seriously lady cause i'm fucked up whats up dolleater, lets get some fuckin chicken dude |
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it's okay. i forgive you. gimme some chicken. |
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thought you were vegan? |
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fuck you dude the lady wants chicken |
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i am. it's funny saying gimme some chicken though.. for soem reason.. i dunno. ima geek. sorry. |
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lady? she's a g-i-r-l... a girl with no undies |
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that was a stupid post... dunno why I made it. |
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hey! |
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sorry. |
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"fuck you dude the lady wants chicken" ... where's that quote thread... |
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girls wear panties, not undies |
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haha... you're probably right haha |
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it's okay. now gimme some beef. |
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okay, so i guess she'd still be a girl with no undies regardless |
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beef? I think you'd have more use of a live cow, don't you think... vegano |
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anyways, back to this story theme... I think it'd be cool to write a short story with everyone here.. like everyone writes a part.. but it cant be stuped and sexual.. .. it'd be soo crazy.. hehe. |
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What the fuck is going on? |
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why don't you start? the thing is, we need to find some way to regulate it, so two people don't write at the same time... |
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Yea.. hmm but how? or it could eventually be one of thos estories where you get to decide which page you wnat.. "to seek a dangerous adventure in the dark and gloomy swamp go to page 24. if you want to ride a unicorn across the beautiful and vivid blue sky go to page 12" |
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yeah, i'd do it. but like corrupted said: don't make it 'stuped' |
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1st or 3rd person narrative? |
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Whoever starts it decides I guess... then just continue it to make sense. We could go in order of names.. of who's involved... but then it'll get messed up when more people come online or whatever.. or leave. |
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theres a good chance this will turn out to be a disaster. I hope the writers use some sense and restraint. Or else it could go from romance to adventure to mystery to sci-fi. Oh yeah. I guess It'd probably be a good idea to stick to one centralized theme. This would also be interesting to write backwards strating with the conclusion and working towards an introduction. -teh yarr. |
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Luna stumbled through her grandmother's cluttered hallway and pushed her body against the washroom door. As it opened with mild restraint, Luna's limp body fell to the cold tiled floor and looked in a frozen stare at her decayed grandmother floating in a pool of death. Luna gently crawled out of the gloomy washroom and into her grandmother's room. She climbed into the bed and gripped the off-white , yellow-stained sheets and prayed for her grandmother to forgive her. The End. |
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you're good. damn good. |
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i write stories and poetry from time to time... (although not any recently) but I would never ever share it. Too personal. |
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(continue.. or de-continue.. end to begining) |
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share! pppppllllleeeeaaassseeee...come on... we're all homies here. |
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I used to say that to. but if what you write really is you - then you have nothing to worry about - show it! If people know you and that is you, then you have nothing to worry about! If people don't know you (as some people might feel, I feel that in some areas of myself) then maybe it's time they did! I have no problems with making stuff I do public - it's just nice with feedback. realize. |
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okay! I'll do some writing. |
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i wouldnt even share this stuff with my wife. if i had a wife. |
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i will say this though... most of my writing happens while im trying to fall asleep. thats when my mind really goes into overdrive for some reason... i started keeping a notebook next to my bed, so I could write down these thoughts/ideas that wouldnt survive in my memory, if I went to sleep. |
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well you better add to this backwards story.. atleast a bit.. |
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002 [let's number it to make it more easy!] ...As she sat and prayed, she realized she was now alone in the big mansion, except for all thoose circumcized men in the basement. She could hear them yelling for their foreskin, down in the basement. They had not become gay yet, they were just damn angry. They had been there for several years, once kidnapped by her grandmother who loved the taste of a delicious foreskin. She let go of her grip (praying), and went down to make sure the basement was properly locked. She felt the door, and it opened. And nobody was in the room anymore, but the few men who didn't make it - and bleed to death. "piss in the face" she thought, "they must have run far away from here by now" and went up to take care of the corpse. But as she came closer to the door she could her the circumsized men... she slam the door open, and was terrified by the look of three dwarfs and several men of normal height eating her grandmothers... pussy... and face... |
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you're cut!1@#@#@$$#@@! |
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that was real sick... perhaps I shouldn't have posted it. why did I even write it? well, I don't like circumsition for one thing. |
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Not my writing, but I just listened to the end of Undertow and this little narrative is one of the best album closings I think after the 10 minutes of ambient sound: "It was daylight when you woke up in your ditch. You looked up at your sky. That made blue be your color. You had your knife there with you too. When you stood up, there was goo all over your clothes. Your hands were sticky. You wiped them on your grass, so now your color was green. Oh lord, why did everything always have to keep changing like this. You were already getting nervous again. Your head hurt and it rang when you stood up. Your head was almost empty, it always hurt you when you woke up like this. You crawled up out of your ditch onto your gravel road and began to walk, waiting for the rest of your mind to come back to you. You could see the car parked far down the road and you walked toward it. If God is our father, you thought, then Satan must be our cousin. Why didn't anyone else understand these important things. When you got to your car you tried all the doors; they were locked. It was a red car and it was new. There was an expensive leather camera case laying on the seat. Out accross your field you could see two tiny people walking by your woods. You began to walk towards them. Now red was your color and, of course, those little people out there were yours too." |
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and the whole concept has just been killed congrats key :-( |
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yes, i write alot actually. might even have some stories in english (for my english classes; i was always very good in writing in english) (btw what the hell have panties to do with short stories) |
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what? what concept? |
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of a story, that wasnt stupid |
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panties are an integral part of short stories |
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