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         |  AphexAcid
             from Sweden on 2003-07-22 15:09 [#00789973] Points: 2568 Status: Lurker
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 | Listen to my tune "Fannki" and tell me what ye think. It's a little funky piece, nothing special, though a happy
 tune. ^_^
 
 www.zebox.com/tofuu
 
 
 
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         |  _user
             from rostov-on-don (Russia) on 2003-07-22 15:41 [#00790012] Points: 1260 Status: Regular | Followup to AphexAcid: #00789973
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 | ok, i'll do it...... 
 .......and you listen to my tunes then...
 
 
 
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         |  evolume
             from seattle (United States) on 2003-07-22 15:45 [#00790015] Points: 10965 Status: Regular
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 | it makes me think of a chipmunk off his lunch, stumbling around, looking for a place to toss his berries.
 
 he stumbles into an old friend who was having a really good
 day, all smiling and full-on chipmunk whistling.  they catch
 one another's eye in the park and then the first chipmunk
 blows all over the other's furry foots.
 
 that's what i think of your track.
 
 
 
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         |  AphexAcid
             from Sweden on 2003-07-22 15:56 [#00790029] Points: 2568 Status: Lurker
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 | Chipmunks? Ahaha, ah, well, any thoughts are fine. 
 
 
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         |  AphexAcid
             from Sweden on 2003-07-22 16:00 [#00790033] Points: 2568 Status: Lurker
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 | _user, "The third step from Dancemusic" sounds as if it could belong to a NES-game. Eerie-sounding Nintendo-music.
 
 
 
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         |  promo
             from United Kingdom on 2003-07-22 16:00 [#00790034] Points: 4227 Status: Addict
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 | Interesting. 
 
 
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         |  promo
             from United Kingdom on 2003-07-22 16:02 [#00790037] Points: 4227 Status: Addict
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 | I think it'd be good if the beats got more funky. The bassline is nice and funky but I guess what one is looking
 for is for the beat to be a bit more funky.
 
 
 
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         |  evolume
             from seattle (United States) on 2003-07-22 16:03 [#00790040] Points: 10965 Status: Regular
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 | and more chipmunks too.  one is looking for more chipmunks
 
 
 
 
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         |  AphexAcid
             from Sweden on 2003-07-22 16:06 [#00790043] Points: 2568 Status: Lurker
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 | More funky beats, then. ^^ 
 And chipmunks.
 
 
 
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         |  _user
             from rostov-on-don (Russia) on 2003-07-22 16:24 [#00790054] Points: 1260 Status: Regular
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 | i'm still downloading....... 
 
 
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         |  Sanguine
             from San Francisco (United States) on 2003-07-22 16:49 [#00790083] Points: 859 Status: Lurker
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 | I didn't really like it, it didn't get me moving or really involved in the music
 
 I did like the pad thing over the bass line, that almost
 made up for the drums, but you didn't play off it more than
 the one idea and had it come back later
 
 The drums don't fit together very well, not tight.
 Compression, verb, something could help tie them together to
 make it sound better.
 
 The drums get a lot better at the end, I agree with the
 other posters, playing on the drum line some more would add
 quite a bit I hear a lot of stuff I've heard before, bass
 line is solid but uninteresting, drums are flat, the panning
 on the snare is too obvious and too much for my tastes.
 
 It's hard trying to give you a review when I don't know what
 you're going for, and I try to be as honest as I can. I
 think this is good groundwork, you have a feel for beats,
 and the bass/pad selection means you have a pretty good ear
 beyond that... but you have tons of polishing to do and need
 to work on your transitions a lot. The piece doesn't flow
 very well, but it's not choppy
 
 Eh... ask questions if you want, hope that helped
 
 
 
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         |  _user
             from rostov-on-don (Russia) on 2003-07-22 16:52 [#00790090] Points: 1260 Status: Regular | Followup to Sanguine: #00790083
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 | your comments're the best.........they're such a detailed.......i like them...^_^
 
 
 
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         |  Sanguine
             from San Francisco (United States) on 2003-07-22 16:56 [#00790094] Points: 859 Status: Lurker
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 | Hehe... thanks... just getting to your tracks, pick one, I'll listen and give my thoughts
 
 
 
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         |  _user
             from rostov-on-don (Russia) on 2003-07-22 17:04 [#00790100] Points: 1260 Status: Regular | Followup to AphexAcid: #00789973
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 | i've listened to it finally.....yeah it's funn[k]y.....tho i doubt i'll listen to it either then just for fun....it's
 nice anyway....btw, it reminds me the original 'dancemusic'
 [which is still incomplete]....
 
 chipmunks rulez!
 
 
 
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         |  _user
             from rostov-on-don (Russia) on 2003-07-22 17:07 [#00790105] Points: 1260 Status: Regular | Followup to Sanguine: #00790094
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 | btw, haven't you listened to last track i've uploaded [lazer]?....
 
 
 
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         |  Sanguine
             from San Francisco (United States) on 2003-07-22 17:08 [#00790106] Points: 859 Status: Lurker
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 | On second thought, I need to go rockclimbing... 
 I listened through lazer, I like the loop it starts out
 with, with the white noise dropping out into the punchier
 sounds, looping that and playing with it could be really
 interesting...
 
 Reminds me of music from the really older electronic crowd,
 especially the first few space oriented TV shows that
 incorporated this kind of music. I'm not very good at
 reviewing this sort of thing, you'd have to explain what you
 were going for, would help a lot... and I'll check back
 tomorrow or the day after when I get back from Squarepusher
 
 
 
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         |  _user
             from rostov-on-don (Russia) on 2003-07-22 17:13 [#00790109] Points: 1260 Status: Regular | Followup to Sanguine: #00790106
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 | get back from squarepusher? 
 
 
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         |  Sanguine
             from San Francisco (United States) on 2003-07-22 17:14 [#00790111] Points: 859 Status: Lurker
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 | San Francisco tomorrow night with Luke Vibert... oh yes 
 
 
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         |  _user
             from rostov-on-don (Russia) on 2003-07-22 17:23 [#00790116] Points: 1260 Status: Regular
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 | you're lucky...... 
 it's not actually a loop.....it's a sort of live
 recording.....
 
 btw, if you'll want to say something about mytx [when you'll
 get back], can you post messages in obscure sounds thread
 pls.....
 
 
 
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         |  AphexAcid
             from Sweden on 2003-07-24 05:59 [#00791800] Points: 2568 Status: Lurker | Followup to Sanguine: #00790083
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 | Great comments, Sanguine. I'll see what I can do. Remember, though, I only made it for fun, "nothing special"
 as mentioned.
 
 
 
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