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offline marlowe from Antarctica on 2003-02-27 08:27 [#00573036]
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could you please have a gander at my poetry, as I might
have it published and need to know which to choose. I
appreciate any time spent on this and any comments.

here

 

offline qrter from the future, and it works (Netherlands, The) on 2003-02-27 08:35 [#00573050]
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I don't understand that site.

it confuses me.

 

offline Bremzen from utrecht (Netherlands, The) on 2003-02-27 08:46 [#00573076]
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I don't need your sweet devotion
I don't want your cheap emotion
give me your dirty love

ah, so you're into poodles, eh?

 

offline marlowe from Antarctica on 2003-02-27 08:47 [#00573078]
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I blame Zappa. Now read. :)

 

offline Bremzen from utrecht (Netherlands, The) on 2003-02-27 08:50 [#00573083]
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i will, i will, but not now... i'm at work.

 

offline glass_eater from a blind nerves area (Switzerland) on 2003-02-27 08:54 [#00573086]
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great, for what i read, flower child is cool and two poems
whilst on opium too

bremzen yummy eraserhead baby :D

 

offline KEYFUMBLER from DUBLIN (Ireland) on 2003-02-27 08:56 [#00573088]
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this work firewall won´t let me through. Must be full of
dirty filthy poems. Shame on you! I´m juts glad vagina has
very few rhymes, mr. potty-writer!


 

offline marlowe from Antarctica on 2003-02-27 09:03 [#00573094]
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hehe -- actually there's only about 1 'erotic' verse in the
whole collexion :D


 

offline qrter from the future, and it works (Netherlands, The) on 2003-02-27 09:18 [#00573100]
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"smashing the anchor of humanity
as I reach into the cosmos"

pretty big words and images, Paul..


 

offline marlowe from Antarctica on 2003-02-27 09:21 [#00573106]
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hey did I give you permission to quote my copyrighted
material Alex!!! I demand you send me a cheque for £10!!
:P

:)

 

offline virginpusher from County Clare on 2003-02-27 09:21 [#00573107]
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Two Poems Written Whilst Stoned On Opium (1997) = Classic!

I liked "the other memory". It made me space out after
reading it. They are all pretty good i like this one and
flower child the best.


 

offline marlowe from Antarctica on 2003-02-27 09:25 [#00573113]
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thanks homez. Those were written in my drug dayz

 

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