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offline Clipper from in a cave with my two friends (United States) on 2003-01-31 20:08 [#00536015]
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sorry, i'm way into poetry these days...here's an e.e.
cummings poem that's one of my favorites:

l(a

le
af

fa
ll
s)

one
l
iness


 

offline rarndaraki from from from from (United States) on 2003-01-31 20:09 [#00536017]
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ahh, i studied that poem last year in enriched lit but i
can't really remember the various meanings and themes that
he presents in it.


 

offline rarndaraki from from from from (United States) on 2003-01-31 20:10 [#00536018]
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well i see the loneliness, and "a leaf falls"


 

offline Clipper from in a cave with my two friends (United States) on 2003-01-31 20:11 [#00536019]
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yeah...there's tons of really cool stuff in it...


 

offline rarndaraki from from from from (United States) on 2003-01-31 20:12 [#00536020]
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falling leaves do resembe autumn, and autumn is often a
metaphor for aging, which leads to dying, just as spring is
birth, and summer is the prime of ones life. this is
cummings being lonely and fearing death. a brilliant idea,
but by no means breakthrough, just cleverly arranged.


 

offline Clipper from in a cave with my two friends (United States) on 2003-01-31 20:16 [#00536021]
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well...i think the way it is arranged is pretty
breakthrough, and constitutes the meaning of the poem as
well...the whole thing is shaped like a one...the word one
is in it...the last line 'iness' is supposed to refer to the
state of being in one's self i think


 

offline rarndaraki from from from from (United States) on 2003-01-31 20:19 [#00536022]
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yea the word "one" really sticks out, its the only word that
is written on one line too.


 

offline Clipper from in a cave with my two friends (United States) on 2003-01-31 20:40 [#00536034]
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it does...i guess all the l's are supposed to represent 1's
as well


 

offline Homestar on 2003-01-31 21:00 [#00536037]
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life is so fucking depwessing


 

offline fleetmouse from Horny for Truth on 2003-01-31 21:09 [#00536039]
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s(b
lo
w
jo
b)
uc
cu
len
t


 

offline Clipper from in a cave with my two friends (United States) on 2003-01-31 21:22 [#00536043]
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ex
(fo
rehe
d)plo
sion


 

offline fleetmouse from Horny for Truth on 2003-01-31 21:25 [#00536044]
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O(fewer returns per unit)ne line


 

offline Q4Z2X on 2003-06-06 13:14 [#00730026]
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that's pretty cool..
i love cummings poems.


 

offline evolume from seattle (United States) on 2003-06-06 13:17 [#00730031]
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he is my favorite poet i think.
he submitted a one word poem to a contest once and won. It
was...

Blod


 

offline evolume from seattle (United States) on 2003-06-06 13:20 [#00730034]
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one of my favorite poems is by Gerard Manly Hopkins:

Márgarét, áre you grieving
Over Goldengrove unleaving?
Leáves líke the things of man, you
With your fresh thoughts care for, can you?
Ah! ás the heart grows older
It will come to such sights colder
By and by, nor spare a sigh
Though worlds of wanwood leafmeal lie;
And yet you will weep and know why.
Now no matter, child, the name:
Sórrow's spríngs áre the same.
Nor mouth had, no nor mind, expressed
What heart heard of, ghost guessed:
It is the blight man was born for,
It is Margaret you mourn for.


 

offline Q4Z2X on 2003-06-06 13:54 [#00730053]
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that's a nice word...blod


 

offline vamason from Zigomatic v17 (United States) on 2003-06-06 14:11 [#00730079]
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"l(a" is one of my fav.'s too... cummings is freakin' hard
shite though... I've never been able to interpret his poems
on my own... has anyone read THE ENORMOUS ROOM... i got it
for my friend's bday, but she hasn't read it yet


 

offline Anus_Presley on 2003-06-07 07:44 [#00730603]
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i adorre e. e. cummings. i rreally do.


 

offline alnuit on 2003-06-08 22:13 [#00732483]
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Thats very similar to grasshopper...have you read that one ?
No point posting it, as it needs to be laid out properly for
you to be able to appreciate it properly... but if you do
get a chance to read it...


 

offline alnuit on 2003-06-08 22:15 [#00732485]
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Infact, here goes.


 

offline Q4Z2X on 2003-06-08 22:18 [#00732488]
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they're all great..


 

offline tibbar from harrisburg, pa (United States) on 2003-06-08 22:22 [#00732492]
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ah, cummings...

now there's a wordsmith to be rekoned with.

him, beckett, and poe. don't know HOW they do it, but they
do.


 

offline Q4Z2X on 2003-06-09 01:23 [#00732590]
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"somewhere i have never traveled, gladly beyond
any experience, your eyes have their silence:
in your most frail gesture are things which enclose me,
or which i cannot touch because they are too near;

your slightest look easily will unclose me
though i have closed myself as fingers,
you open always petal by petal myself as Spring opens
(touching skillfully, mysteriously) her first rose;

or if your wish be to close me, i and
my life will shut very beautifully, suddenly,
as when the heart of this flower imagines
the snow carefully everywhere descending;
nothing which we are to perceive in this world equals
the power of your intense fragility: whose texture
compels me with the color of its countries,
rendering death and forever with each breathing;

(i do not know what it is about you that closes
and opens; only something in me understands
the voice of your eyes is deeper than all roses)
nobody, not even the rain, has such small hands."


 

offline Q4Z2X on 2003-06-09 01:23 [#00732591]
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another great poem by cummings


 

offline tibbar from harrisburg, pa (United States) on 2003-06-09 01:45 [#00732596]
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yes, excellante!


 


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