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you 150 proof bullet you o'reilly factoid humaniteeballerina... spin around you sixshooter on the turnstile eyes aimed at the bartender... you southoldmid westerner you bobble head doll incometaxi... fix up a dustcloud shuffle and a 52cylinderpickup hand stuffed in the pocket of the world. |
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*your sixshooter |
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did richard hire you make up titles for 'Drukqs'? |
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yeah...but the only one he excepted was 'father' |
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are you mad at me? |
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nope...you like autechre |
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that's true |
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you're not really developing, are you.. |
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what do you mean, qrter? |
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if you ask me you're only listening with one ear =) |
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shut up...i'm listening with three ears |
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Clipper - Morton 1 - 0 :P |
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hehe..i wish we were talking more about poetry |
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no feedback besides 'you're not really developing, are you...'? |
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I meant it looks like you're repeating yourself, pasting words together, no real structure evolving. with what I've read from you, I see no real progression. |
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ah ha ha ha... I love your poems now because they're parodies of poems |
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interesting qrter...are you into frost? |
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wMw...i didn't intend to parody poetry with that one |
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:( |
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it forces the observer to re-examine what exactly poetry ... is, like otto von schirach does for music. oh yeah. |
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cool...thanks |
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couldn't care less. sorry! what i need now is some sleep! good night! |
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spin around, you sixshooter on the turnstile eyes aimed at the bartender... That is fucking choice. Leave it as "you" sixshooter and add that comma; I get a really strong image of your cowboy spinning like a gun cylinder on the axis of his own vision. |
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