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Phatbert 000
from Augsburg (Germany) on 2002-08-10 17:32 [#00344052]
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New track, Aural Sechs. here please tell us what you think. thanks, pb.
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Nexus 6
from Netherlands, The on 2002-08-10 17:39 [#00344055]
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I like the new beat, but so far the melody's not really my type of thing.
Oh wait a cooler melody part jumped in. I like it. But it needs more alternation so far imo. I'm at 2:45...
Nice break... I like this track, but I'd like to hear a cooler melody
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Phatbert 000
from Augsburg (Germany) on 2002-08-10 17:57 [#00344076]
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thanks for checking it out Nexus 6. I think I'll extend/change the melody a bit and see if that makes it better.
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Phatbert 000
from Augsburg (Germany) on 2002-08-10 19:05 [#00344127]
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anyone else wanna have a listen? It's good, honest.
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Phatbert 000
from Augsburg (Germany) on 2002-08-10 20:43 [#00344191]
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come oorrrrrrnnnn .nu'ers!!!
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Phatbert 000
from Augsburg (Germany) on 2002-08-11 10:19 [#00344744]
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like, ..., anyone? hellloo???
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w M w
from London (United Kingdom) on 2002-08-11 10:38 [#00344751]
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This is a really long song. It's not something I'd hear more than once because it's not especially innovative. The best part was the melody at around 2:00 or so, because it was a round played probably 3 rows after the original which gives it a particular quirky symmetry. I know there's a lot of effort changing in direction, but these don't really seem interesting enough to bother interpreting too extensively. The melody at 6:20 was really great too. I'd rather the whole track be structured from one simple whole like that. I bet additions to music are almost always harmful, like genetic mutations in evolution. The only thing most additions have in common is the same tempo, they just kind of phase in sync with eachother, it's just more noise added to the same loop without reason usually.
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DJ Buzz
from Odessa (Ukraine) on 2002-08-11 11:31 [#00344768]
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Nice track. However, if I were you, I'd add more breaks to it - sounds somehow 'passive'. On the other hand, if you DID mean it to be passive and melancholic in a way, you'd better extend a melody somehow (what comes up my mind is Ae's Silverside).
Anyway - try to add some action; justify those 7 minutes you go for...
My 2 cents
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Phatbert 000
from Augsburg (Germany) on 2002-08-11 11:56 [#00344780]
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thanks dj buzz. I've got another track coming up later today which at the moment is 10 minutes but I want to get it down to 6.
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Phatbert 000
from Augsburg (Germany) on 2002-08-15 19:37 [#00351157]
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Anyone else wanna have a listen and give us some feedback?
I'll check out your tracks too.
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