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offline Zeus from San Francisco (United States) on 2002-07-19 06:08 [#00315800]
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Poetry is a waste of time
the only cool thing is the predictable ryhme
sappy somber depressing emotions
mostly about tears flowing like oceans
its pretty damn sad to write it all down
when you could get off your ass and turn things around
you might protest and you might disagree
but as far as i go it fucking kills me


 

offline afxNUMB from So.Flo on 2002-07-19 06:11 [#00315804]
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That was great!! well written my friend, I loved it


 

offline Zeus from San Francisco (United States) on 2002-07-19 06:13 [#00315806]
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it was publish in my annual highschool poetry book

the 12th grade ap english teacher tried to keep me out of
the class, based on this poem

she was outraged


 

offline afxNUMB from So.Flo on 2002-07-19 06:16 [#00315807]
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you used fucking?


 

offline Zeus from San Francisco (United States) on 2002-07-19 06:16 [#00315808]
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yeah

but they put f**king in the book

FUCKING censors


 

offline afxNUMB from So.Flo on 2002-07-19 06:20 [#00315816]
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Hahaha, hey good shit man.I liked reading it.


 

offline Zeus from San Francisco (United States) on 2002-07-19 06:36 [#00315826]
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im glad you ALL liked it so much


 

offline Zeus from San Francisco (United States) on 2002-07-19 06:45 [#00315830]
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in case anyone didnt notice...

its a joke

i dont really hate poetry...

it was meant to be ironic... writting a poem complaing about
how people write poems that complain about stuff...

get it?

eh?

yeah


 

offline nanotech from Sukavasti Amitaba Pureland (United States) on 2002-07-19 07:03 [#00315839]
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U didn't have to be so condesending to the whole comunity be
explaining it...

i actually thought this was a thoughtfull thread till that
last post.


 

offline Zeus from San Francisco (United States) on 2002-07-19 07:04 [#00315843]
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well everyone just ignored it excpet afx



 

offline Zeus from San Francisco (United States) on 2002-07-19 07:05 [#00315846]
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i was afraid people took it literally and didnt want to
respond out of disgust

it wasnt meant to be condesending


 

offline rchrddvdjms from pellentrix (Papua new Guinea) on 2003-02-21 12:04 [#00565042]
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gahhhd! this is great


 


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