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Ross
from Canada on 2002-06-29 20:55 [#00289481]
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Progression. Regression. Mental indigestion. Set the cannons loose. Plans. Fractured. Hopes. Practical. Impractical. Impartial. Impotent. Potent. Weak in their strongminded tanks. Silence. Please. They may still hear you over the disturbances. Silence. Placement. Displacement. You know where you stand. Please don’t stand there. Lines. Hearts. Wires. Lines with wires to our hearts. Hardly broken. Mistakes are plenty. Smiles. Self-reassurance is sometimes like being my own televangelist. Sell. Buy. Not too much. Not too little. Not enough? Buy more. Technical + Spiritual, they’d make you believe it’s like tea without biscuits. My heart. My head. One’s a bleeding river, one’s thinking that I’ve just overreacted.
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plugexpert
from Nijmegen (Netherlands, The) on 2002-06-29 22:58 [#00289549]
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your poem is nice,.................
.........for me to poop on!!
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Ross
from Canada on 2002-06-29 23:01 [#00289551]
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aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, alright
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2002-06-29 23:35 [#00289567]
Points: 24578 Status: Lurker | Followup to Ross: #00289481
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gosh you're sensitive
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jabizzy
from St. Louis, Misery. Er, that's (United States) on 2002-06-30 00:41 [#00289612]
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Heh, the nature of the artist comes out when he writes poetry. (By the way, if you don't write poetry I'm not saying you're not an artist, cause that's a whole other category in itself.) Anyway, I don't know why, because usually I can't stand poetry whatsoever, but it stuck me. Perhaps because a lot sounds familiar.
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jabizzy
from St. Louis, Misery. Er, that's (United States) on 2002-06-30 00:42 [#00289613]
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"It *struck me"
I'm always the one making typos!
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mylittlesister
from ...wherever (United Kingdom) on 2002-06-30 01:07 [#00289625]
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i wrote a cheesey poem.....
anyone want to hear it?
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smokehammer
from Saigon (Vietnam) on 2002-06-30 01:21 [#00289633]
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oh go on then ....:)
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mylittlesister
from ...wherever (United Kingdom) on 2002-06-30 01:30 [#00289639]
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haha, its v.bad....
Who is this person called love? I dont think we've properly met. Everyone talks about them, Maybe we could meet up one day!
So is it a he or a she? Wot do you mean "it depends"? Can't you give me an answer, or does no one know anything about them at all?
I spose I'll never meet them, I'll find other people to meet. Maybe I'll meet them later on, when they come to find me.
Who else is there to meet? I've met almost all the others. Maybe love's gone and killed them all. Does love ever do any good?
hmmm, now go produce a lifetimes-worth of cheese!
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2002-06-30 01:46 [#00289650]
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"my name is jack i like to whack off at nite to porno shite"
by: my-little-sister
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smokehammer
from Saigon (Vietnam) on 2002-06-30 01:50 [#00289653]
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peace
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mylittlesister
from ...wherever (United Kingdom) on 2002-06-30 01:56 [#00289658]
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hahaha....
"my name is paul I'll bomb seoul to kill all the fools who play with footballs
I'm a nice bloke, right i dont like to fight cos i like to lie off my ass till i see blue grass"
by:marlowe_23 (the twat!)
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Ophecks
from Nova Scotia (Canada) on 2002-06-30 02:04 [#00289668]
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Nice poems, though poetry isn't usually my style... mostly, it just makes me cringe... a really good poem can blow me away, though.
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diemax
from somewhere in tennessee :( (United States) on 2002-06-30 02:15 [#00289675]
Points: 2040 Status: Lurker | Followup to Ophecks: #00289668
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ophecks... YOU can blow me- and you don't have to blow me away
(if you print this out and mail it to me i'll mail you back an autographed copy of my stunning poetical work)
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2002-06-30 02:32 [#00289682]
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thanx jack for calling me a twat
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mylittlesister
from ...wherever (United Kingdom) on 2002-06-30 02:35 [#00289683]
Points: 8472 Status: Regular | Followup to marlowe: #00289682
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i cant take credit for it all, u were too much of an influence for me to do that!
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2002-06-30 02:44 [#00289695]
Points: 24578 Status: Lurker | Followup to mylittlesister: #00289683
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you've done well son ;)
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Ross
from Canada on 2002-06-30 21:47 [#00290604]
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thanks jabizzy, much appreciated
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