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offline Ross from Canada on 2002-06-29 20:55 [#00289481]
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Progression. Regression. Mental indigestion. Set the
cannons loose. Plans. Fractured. Hopes. Practical.
Impractical. Impartial. Impotent. Potent. Weak in their
strongminded tanks. Silence. Please. They may still hear you
over the disturbances. Silence. Placement. Displacement. You
know where you stand. Please don’t stand there. Lines.
Hearts. Wires. Lines with wires to our hearts. Hardly
broken. Mistakes are plenty. Smiles. Self-reassurance is
sometimes like being my own televangelist. Sell. Buy. Not
too much. Not too little. Not enough? Buy more. Technical +
Spiritual, they’d make you believe it’s like tea without
biscuits. My heart. My head. One’s a bleeding river,
one’s thinking that I’ve just overreacted.


 

offline plugexpert from Nijmegen (Netherlands, The) on 2002-06-29 22:58 [#00289549]
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your poem is nice,.................

.........for me to poop on!!


 

offline Ross from Canada on 2002-06-29 23:01 [#00289551]
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aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, alright


 

offline marlowe from Antarctica on 2002-06-29 23:35 [#00289567]
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gosh you're sensitive


 

offline jabizzy from St. Louis, Misery. Er, that's (United States) on 2002-06-30 00:41 [#00289612]
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Heh, the nature of the artist comes out when he writes
poetry. (By the way, if you don't write poetry I'm not
saying you're not an artist, cause that's a whole other
category in itself.) Anyway, I don't know why, because
usually I can't stand poetry whatsoever, but it stuck me.
Perhaps because a lot sounds familiar.


 

offline jabizzy from St. Louis, Misery. Er, that's (United States) on 2002-06-30 00:42 [#00289613]
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"It *struck me"

I'm always the one making typos!


 

offline mylittlesister from ...wherever (United Kingdom) on 2002-06-30 01:07 [#00289625]
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i wrote a cheesey poem.....

anyone want to hear it?


 

offline smokehammer from Saigon (Vietnam) on 2002-06-30 01:21 [#00289633]
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oh go on then ....:)



 

offline mylittlesister from ...wherever (United Kingdom) on 2002-06-30 01:30 [#00289639]
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haha, its v.bad....

Who is this person called love?
I dont think we've properly met.
Everyone talks about them,
Maybe we could meet up one day!

So is it a he or a she?
Wot do you mean "it depends"?
Can't you give me an answer,
or does no one know anything about them at all?

I spose I'll never meet them,
I'll find other people to meet.
Maybe I'll meet them later on,
when they come to find me.

Who else is there to meet?
I've met almost all the others.
Maybe love's gone and killed them all.
Does love ever do any good?

hmmm, now go produce a lifetimes-worth of cheese!


 

offline marlowe from Antarctica on 2002-06-30 01:46 [#00289650]
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"my name is jack
i like to whack
off at nite
to porno shite"

by: my-little-sister


 

offline smokehammer from Saigon (Vietnam) on 2002-06-30 01:50 [#00289653]
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peace


 

offline mylittlesister from ...wherever (United Kingdom) on 2002-06-30 01:56 [#00289658]
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hahaha....

"my name is paul
I'll bomb seoul
to kill all the fools
who play with footballs

I'm a nice bloke, right
i dont like to fight
cos i like to lie off my ass
till i see blue grass"

by:marlowe_23 (the twat!)



 

offline Ophecks from Nova Scotia (Canada) on 2002-06-30 02:04 [#00289668]
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Nice poems, though poetry isn't usually my style... mostly,
it just makes me cringe... a really good poem can blow me
away, though.


 

offline diemax from somewhere in tennessee :( (United States) on 2002-06-30 02:15 [#00289675]
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ophecks...
YOU can blow me-
and you don't have to blow me away

(if you print this out and mail it to me i'll mail you back
an autographed copy of my stunning poetical work)


 

offline marlowe from Antarctica on 2002-06-30 02:32 [#00289682]
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thanx jack
for calling me a twat


 

offline mylittlesister from ...wherever (United Kingdom) on 2002-06-30 02:35 [#00289683]
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i cant take credit for it all, u were too much of an
influence for me to do that!


 

offline marlowe from Antarctica on 2002-06-30 02:44 [#00289695]
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you've done well son ;)


 

offline Ross from Canada on 2002-06-30 21:47 [#00290604]
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thanks jabizzy, much appreciated


 


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