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Spookyluke
from United States on 2002-05-13 01:28 [#00217095]
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I have two recently completed tracks in zipped loop format--can you check them out and tell me what you htink? One of them I think turned out pretty well, the other one I think needs something.
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Ophecks
from Nova Scotia (Canada) on 2002-05-13 02:36 [#00217125]
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Well, the first one is good and the second one is gooder. I suggest adding some goodness to the first one, and leaving the second one as is.
Oh shit, I'm not Flea!!!
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Spookyluke
from United States on 2002-05-13 02:37 [#00217128]
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hahahahaha Well, thanks anyway, Ophecks! :)
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flea
from depths of your mind (New Zealand) on 2002-05-13 02:38 [#00217130]
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no probs..point me to em..or email em to me..:)
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Spookyluke
from United States on 2002-05-13 02:40 [#00217132]
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I'll e-mail 'em now! :D Thanks!! :D
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Spookyluke
from United States on 2002-05-13 02:45 [#00217135]
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E-mail sent! Thank you again!
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flea
from depths of your mind (New Zealand) on 2002-05-13 02:46 [#00217136]
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ok I might be a bit gettin back to you.is that alright?..no access to sound right now :(
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Spookyluke
from United States on 2002-05-13 02:48 [#00217138]
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Sure--take all the time you need! It can be months if it needs to be ;)
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flea
from depths of your mind (New Zealand) on 2002-05-13 02:53 [#00217141]
Points: 9083 Status: Regular | Followup to Spookyluke: #00217138
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more like two days:)
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Spookyluke
from United States on 2002-05-13 02:54 [#00217143]
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No sweat at all then! :)
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flea
from depths of your mind (New Zealand) on 2002-05-13 03:05 [#00217156]
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um..I havent received it yet..
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Spookyluke
from United States on 2002-05-13 03:07 [#00217158]
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Ahh I think I sent to wrong person. :) I'm sorry! I'll try again.
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Spookyluke
from United States on 2002-05-13 03:11 [#00217163]
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I sent it to you, but it says habala_p_kabala@hotmail.com has permenant fatal errors.
I'll upload them: mandibles.zip
the flood.zip
Thanks, sorry about all the chaos. :(
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flea
from depths of your mind (New Zealand) on 2002-05-13 03:47 [#00217209]
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hey that's cool...I will have to down em at home though..
ah I know what went wrong hotmail only maximum of 1 meg attachment upped and downed..you will have to make em two seperate emails..
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flea
from depths of your mind (New Zealand) on 2002-05-13 04:44 [#00217313]
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okay just listening to mandibles now..took a bit to digest..it's a massive sprawling track..heaps of really cool stuff going on..two critiques so far...the lowest kick is just flat and dull sounding..I would loose that..it's taking a lot away from everything else...most of the riffs I like..pretty spooky and quirky at the same time.....secondly some of the sections are going on for a bit too long..I would reduce the number of times they are repeated..the last cat sounding synth is hysterical..but carries on for a bit too long...the vocal sample going aaah is fantastic..
hence like I said a bit of snipping and tidying up you have got a cool song
plus that snare rush..export it as a single track and then reimport it and feed it to the grianulizer and clone the track a few times..with slightly different tweaks and settings....and alternate them..rather more randomly and slightly more often...
hope this helps..
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Spookyluke
from United States on 2002-05-14 02:56 [#00218609]
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Thanks! Yes, that helped a lot! I'll be fixin' the kicks and snares--maybe cutting some of the synths shorter, too!
Thanks again! Much help!
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