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luzid
from Meerbusch (Germany) on 2002-04-29 08:42 [#00199018]
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hi!
i have a new _unfinished_ track done, and i really don't know if i should continue this track, or if it's complete crap :/
here it is:
[url]www.schocklage.org/d0n-ein_track.mp3[/url]
please listen to it, and tell me your opinion about it. it has been done with real machines, not with softsynths and stuff.
luzid
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luzid
from Meerbusch (Germany) on 2002-04-29 08:43 [#00199020]
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eh.. here's the link:
ein_track.mp3 (3,3mb)
luzid
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Ceri JC
from Jefferson City (United States) on 2002-04-29 08:44 [#00199022]
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I'm Dling it now, I'll let you know what I think...
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luzid
from Meerbusch (Germany) on 2002-04-29 08:44 [#00199023]
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haha. i am too stupid to post an url :/
the track is HERE
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luzid
from Meerbusch (Germany) on 2002-04-29 08:45 [#00199024]
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ceri: *hint* i asked two ppl about their opinion, and they said, the sound must be more "dirty". so i will distort the melody a little bit. but i don't really like the track over all :/
luzid
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Ceri JC
from Jefferson City (United States) on 2002-04-29 08:47 [#00199025]
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The DL doesn't get any more than 0% :(
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luzid
from Meerbusch (Germany) on 2002-04-29 08:49 [#00199028]
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hm, i can download it completely.
click on that link in my third posting (where i said "the track is HERE")
luzid
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Ceri JC
from Jefferson City (United States) on 2002-04-29 08:49 [#00199029]
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I've got it now...
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Ceri JC
from Jefferson City (United States) on 2002-04-29 08:51 [#00199031]
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I like the way it changes about 1.05 min into it. I like the end 2/3rds more than the intro.
Good drumming and I like the electronic noise that sounds a bit like scratching.
I think with a bit of work it could be quite good.
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luzid
from Meerbusch (Germany) on 2002-04-29 08:54 [#00199033]
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thanks for listening to it. so, i think i will not throw it away now.. maybe i can make it sound good. i will post it here if i am satisfied ;)
luzid
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Ceri JC
from Jefferson City (United States) on 2002-04-29 08:57 [#00199040]
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Cool. LEt me know when it's finished :)
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aneurySm
from Ypsilanti (United States) on 2002-04-29 08:57 [#00199042]
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half your sounds seem like MIDI that sound can be cute i guess but when it;s with other stuph well i dunno but you say no softsynths so i;m impressed coz me only program some stuphe here
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Meho Krljic
from Beograd (Yugoslavia) on 2002-04-29 08:59 [#00199046]
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Hey, luzid, i think the track is no worse than half signed IDM shit out there. Although not terribly original or groundbreaking, but you know your way with sounds...
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luzid
from Meerbusch (Germany) on 2002-04-29 09:03 [#00199053]
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aneurySm: hm. yeah. i think i tried to make a "cute" track. but somehow it doesn't fit together. i will work on it
meho: hehe. thanks. i can live with being not worse than half signed IDM shit ;)
no, really. i will try to improve.
luzid
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w M w
from London (United Kingdom) on 2002-04-29 09:07 [#00199057]
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I like how the entire composition isn't tied down to one definate pattern throughout, I like the pitch shifting sounds used in the melody and the melody itself. The organization of percussion was good, but not superb in my opinion. The whole song was good but not suberp in my opinion 3.
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luzid
from Meerbusch (Germany) on 2002-04-29 09:16 [#00199065]
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at least noone thinks, it sounds like complete crap. because that's somehow what I think. :/
it's really hard to quality-check your own tracks :/
luzid
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Phatbert 000
from Augsburg (Germany) on 2002-04-29 09:56 [#00199101]
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I'm dling it now.
Could you review my latest too luzid?
Here's the thread to reply in: http://www.aphextwin.nu/mb/topic.php3?topic=12956&start=0&s eekwrd=&idxstart=0
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Phatbert 000
from Augsburg (Germany) on 2002-04-29 10:06 [#00199111]
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I didn't like the first minute or so at all with those random scratchy noises but after the 1:05 mark it becomes quite a relaxing track. The only thing that gets me is that the sounds all sound a bit cheap although the melodies and the actual drum patterns are great. This is meant in a positive way in case I didn't make much sense.
So yeah, keep at it!
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luzid
from Meerbusch (Germany) on 2002-04-29 10:26 [#00199133]
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pahtbert: thanks for listening. i am at the office now, so i can't listen to your tracks (mangels soundkarte ;)), but i will do it when i am at home.
luzid
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luzid
from Meerbusch (Germany) on 2002-04-30 00:15 [#00199957]
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okay, here is the new version, and i think it sounds quite okay now. at least i hope so. i think i will change some stuff, but hm.. whatever.. ;)
HERE!
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luzid
from Meerbusch (Germany) on 2002-04-30 08:55 [#00200486]
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come on you cunts, tell me if the new version is okay :)
luzid
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Junktion
from Northern Jutland (Denmark) on 2002-04-30 09:00 [#00200491]
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i like the mellownes and the happiness
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