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dave
from saskatoon (Canada) on 2002-04-22 05:46 [#00188416]
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i really never do this but i think this song is ok but it needs changes and i think i need some feedback so i know where to fix it, i think it's really repetitive and i got very lazy when i was making it so check it out
it's the first one
http://zebox.com/dave/music/
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jupitah
from Minneapolis (United States) on 2002-04-22 05:54 [#00188422]
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I like it. I don't have much to recomend specifically, but I should say, I wasn't watching the clock in Winamp and at the end of it sounded as if it were about to bust into some hardcore shit, and I got really excited, but then it stopped:( If it were to get really hard at the ending I'd probably enjoy it many times more. Maybe loop the same business, but add some new percussion, harder beats and a new slow dramatic melody over the top of it. Maybe that is specific. Good shit anyhow.
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xlr
from Boston (United States) on 2002-04-22 05:55 [#00188423]
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It's pretty cool...i like it when that waaaaahhhhhh stuff comes in. I'm not really sure what to tell you in regards to fixing it though...
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jupitah
from Minneapolis (United States) on 2002-04-22 05:58 [#00188427]
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Also, I can really the title. It's perfect, as if I pertially understand Akron now.
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jupitah
from Minneapolis (United States) on 2002-04-22 05:58 [#00188428]
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"can really feel the title"
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dave
from saskatoon (Canada) on 2002-04-22 06:05 [#00188434]
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accually i no nothing about the place , i just think it's a cool name
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dave
from saskatoon (Canada) on 2002-04-22 06:05 [#00188436]
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and that hardcore ending is a cool idea
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aron
from saskatoon (Canada) on 2002-04-22 06:10 [#00188441]
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i left a long comment about it on your livejournal.
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numbplant
from st- jérôme québec (Canada) on 2002-04-22 06:20 [#00188448]
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ive just dl all 3 and i like em cant help much for the finishing of that song but jupitah had a good Idea
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jupitah
from Minneapolis (United States) on 2002-04-22 06:23 [#00188450]
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No, I don't think Akron actually exists on this planet, but the idea of it just seemed to really work with the song, like some beautiful city/nation/planet.
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aron
from saskatoon (Canada) on 2002-04-22 06:31 [#00188455]
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akron is a city, i belive
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jupitah
from Minneapolis (United States) on 2002-04-22 06:33 [#00188456]
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k, i totally misunderstood.
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xlr
from Boston (United States) on 2002-04-22 06:34 [#00188458]
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yeah it's in Ohio.
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nanotech
from Sukavasti Amitaba Pureland (United States) on 2002-04-22 06:34 [#00188459]
Points: 3727 Status: Regular | Followup to xlr: #00188458
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damn your avatar is such a tease....
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