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right where it itch yous sportin an xltronic soul patch jivverdicker spreads open his hatch while drummond makes the first pitch sexual fantasia with wav-fallus in malaysia radio psychologist like Fraisa CRANE dog belch with a small penis like vegan chow mein ladies and gentlemen ya'll feel the xltronic wane |
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Love your avatar |
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Nice shout out to dog_belch |
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Work on your rhyme scheme as it reads as rubbish. Actually read some of Education isn't all bad. |
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A lot of these people died for a cause, they were young and left their loved ones behind. |
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i thought it was good |
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Read some real poetry. |
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ok poetry judge master |
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You have been judged, you will be a better person if you read and understand. |
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if ur such a pro why dont u analyse the poem above |
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so ur not up 4 the task i see jivverdicker. maybe i can help structurly its a poem using a irregular meter and rhyme sceme that is very evident in the 7th line reading simply "CRANE" (a allusion to titular character of the tv series "frasier") which abruply shifts the rhyme thematicly the poem regards the theme of self destructive decay. line 2 "yous sportin an xltronic soul patch" x Y xreferences any1 reading the poem... by readidng the poem on xlt they made xlt part of there own identity, like a face hair style thus they are the subject of the poem itself. the next 2 lines use metaphor 2 describe a anal sex act by 2 of xlts biggest trolls which is itself a metaphor for the postings on xlt. the ambigulously homophobic tone suggests the 2 trolls my find pleasure in the act but also feel shame about it and ultimatly a lack of fullfillment. in the poems final line the x Y x cements the idea that the site is decaying because of trolls so its probly not gonna win a nobel peace prize for literature but u cant diss it without really READING it 1st jivverdicker |
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