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offline hevquip from megagram dusk sect (United States) on 2002-04-12 17:01 [#00169989]
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leaves...
blow o'er here
blow o'er there
a placid chill
soothes the air
the days will drift
with the clouds
as the wind
blows the brown-
leaves
and somberly,
their rustling
puts me to sleep

through the breeze
float the leaves
now let ME float
to my dreams


 

offline pachi from yo momma (United States) on 2002-04-12 17:29 [#00170014]
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i havent written a poem in quite a while
i'll c if i can write a tanka:

mountains in the sun
bright blue sky absent of clouds
morning breeze is fresh
snow blankets the calm terrain
as the sun pokes her face out

that's how one could describe this morning in alaska


 

offline DirtyPriest from Copenhagen (Denmark) on 2002-04-12 18:26 [#00170115]
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Sex is overrated
i tend to hate it
when there is love within
lust is in the bin

not really about nature, but it just acured to me. =)

nice poems two you two =)


 

offline DirtyPriest from Copenhagen (Denmark) on 2002-04-12 18:34 [#00170133]
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She looks like someone
You would like to know
Her love is fragile
Like silent snow

To tend her needs
Perhaps i am suitable
But who will know
The longin is horrible


 

offline Taoist Blockade from Wales on 2002-04-12 18:48 [#00170162]
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roses are red
violets are blue
you're fatter than a washing machine
I hate you


 

offline marlowe from Antarctica on 2002-04-12 18:49 [#00170164]
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man with one leg
fall down


 

offline DirtyPriest from Copenhagen (Denmark) on 2002-04-12 18:51 [#00170168]
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Haha.

i like it.


 

offline w M w from London (United Kingdom) on 2002-04-12 18:51 [#00170169]
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That was so deep and stuff *sniff* It could use some
similies and metaphors

Harketh!
The photosynthetic fallen
courageous castaways
of the melancholy canopy
drifteth
across the limitless leaf litter
like a smurf without a little white hat
Speaketh thou toeth me!
what do the leaves say??
SHHHHHHH!!!
Listen...
*brrrrrrrrnt*
Ah, the leaves hath farted on me
I respect them
And I join them,
tumbling, turning, twisting
and farting on unsuspecting poets
across the limitless leaf litter


 

offline Taoist Blockade from Wales on 2002-04-12 18:53 [#00170175]
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My name is Hecta
im the Bo Selecta
I know im deaf cause I cant hear what cho sayin to me...


 

offline marlowe from Antarctica on 2002-04-12 18:55 [#00170179]
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I NEVER SAID A WORD!


 

offline Taoist Blockade from Wales on 2002-04-12 18:59 [#00170181]
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My heart is like a birds nest
wallowing in the fog of your contempt
lizards have moved in
stolen the eggs of my hope
that never came,
Ive seen it all,
Im going home,
Im very much alone,
in this subterreanean cyber dome.


 

offline Taoist Blockade from Wales on 2002-04-12 19:02 [#00170184]
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I love you too much,
your lack of speech is erased from my mind,
I want to make love to you in the forest,
anywhere but the brothel


 

offline w M w from London (United Kingdom) on 2002-04-12 19:02 [#00170185]
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oooh, your use of metaphor was a warm gust of wind from a
pile of dead seaguls at the beach!


 

offline marlowe from Antarctica on 2002-04-12 19:03 [#00170187]
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an eternal pause
like a nuclear holocaust
zombies munching on my innards
jesus saves but i'm a sinner
a cannibal sucking out my brains
after watching "revenge of the bloodsucking freaks from
intergalactic section 23 Vs the horrific zombie mutants who
stopped living and became messed up squid-headed mushroom
eaters" i'll never be the same
again


 

offline w M w from London (United Kingdom) on 2002-04-12 19:05 [#00170189]
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ooh, nice one, I like how one line had a rediculous amount
of syllables lol


 

offline marlowe from Antarctica on 2002-04-12 19:10 [#00170194]
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;) yes i had fun with that one!


 

offline Taoist Blockade from Wales on 2002-04-12 19:13 [#00170198]
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I took off her shirt...
BWAHANANANAWAA
I took off her bra...
WHAHAHHABNBABA
I took off her panties....
WHAHATAHAH
You know what I SAW!
WEEHAHHAHAHAHA.

A dick.


 

offline w M w from London (United Kingdom) on 2002-04-12 19:13 [#00170199]
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hmm, now I'll play with the technique of repetition the same
line, like a reoccuring theme or something, first I need a
totally stupid line that does not deserve repetition:

repulsively attractive
attractively repulsive
I would not eat a pizza with nipple-ronies

They look delecious
I can't stop thinking about them
I might not eat a pizza with nipple-ronies

They look disguisting
I want to try one
*I ate the pizza with nipple-ronies*

I hate those stupid "I am " poems that teachers all got
together in their evil castle and decided to make all their
kids to.
I am steve
I like steve
when I cry I feel like steve
I dream of steve
I am steve


 

offline marlowe from Antarctica on 2002-04-12 19:18 [#00170201]
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hey look! i'm a wrestler and i didn't even know it!!!!


 

offline marlowe from Antarctica on 2002-04-12 19:20 [#00170205]
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and i'm a goddam screenwriter!!!!


 

offline Resident Evil from heat some coffee, mmm, mmm (Australia) on 2002-04-12 19:24 [#00170212]
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I can't write good poems
Perhaps I'd be better if I was friends with Gnomes
Theres no way I can rhyeme (Or spell)
Oh look, I'm outta time (hell).


 

offline Resident Evil from heat some coffee, mmm, mmm (Australia) on 2002-04-12 19:25 [#00170214]
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"and i'm a goddam screenwriter!!!!"

You wrote Murder, She Wrote!! All hail marlowe.



 

offline w M w from London (United Kingdom) on 2002-04-12 19:26 [#00170216]
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Your wrestler only has a 2 in punching.


 

offline marlowe from Antarctica on 2002-04-12 19:27 [#00170218]
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hey! you forgot THE DUKES OF HAZZARD!! ;)


 

offline marlowe from Antarctica on 2002-04-12 19:28 [#00170219]
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careful - i can still piledriver you thru a table you big
enchilada!!


 

offline Resident Evil from heat some coffee, mmm, mmm (Australia) on 2002-04-12 19:29 [#00170221]
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"hey! you forgot THE DUKES OF HAZZARD!! ;)"

I'm an idiot! How could I forget the Dukes! Well atleast
Daisy :0)



 

offline marlowe from Antarctica on 2002-04-12 19:32 [#00170227]
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i shagged her you know ;)


 

offline uzim on 2002-04-12 19:50 [#00170251]
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black
i feel so empty
into my cocoon of darkness
too afraid to look deeper inside this chasm
the lights are glowing and disappearing
far away from me
alone
staring at this dead light
i'm the only one to see


 

offline marlowe from Antarctica on 2002-04-12 20:26 [#00170291]
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well you know how to lower the mood at the drop of a hat
huh?


 

offline uzim on 2002-04-12 20:35 [#00170305]
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sorry... i felt quite sad lately...

something more joyous:
http://www.yomgaille.com/bordel/un_lapin.html
(if you haven't already seen it :))


 

offline marlowe from Antarctica on 2002-04-12 20:39 [#00170313]
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cunilingus
or use your fingers


 


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