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hevquip
from megagram dusk sect (United States) on 2002-04-12 17:01 [#00169989]
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leaves... blow o'er here blow o'er there a placid chill soothes the air the days will drift with the clouds as the wind blows the brown- leaves and somberly, their rustling puts me to sleep
through the breeze float the leaves now let ME float to my dreams
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pachi
from yo momma (United States) on 2002-04-12 17:29 [#00170014]
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i havent written a poem in quite a while i'll c if i can write a tanka:
mountains in the sun bright blue sky absent of clouds morning breeze is fresh snow blankets the calm terrain as the sun pokes her face out
that's how one could describe this morning in alaska
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DirtyPriest
from Copenhagen (Denmark) on 2002-04-12 18:26 [#00170115]
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Sex is overrated i tend to hate it when there is love within lust is in the bin
not really about nature, but it just acured to me. =)
nice poems two you two =)
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DirtyPriest
from Copenhagen (Denmark) on 2002-04-12 18:34 [#00170133]
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She looks like someone You would like to know Her love is fragile Like silent snow
To tend her needs Perhaps i am suitable But who will know The longin is horrible
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Taoist Blockade
from Wales on 2002-04-12 18:48 [#00170162]
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roses are red violets are blue you're fatter than a washing machine I hate you
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2002-04-12 18:49 [#00170164]
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man with one leg fall down
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DirtyPriest
from Copenhagen (Denmark) on 2002-04-12 18:51 [#00170168]
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Haha.
i like it.
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w M w
from London (United Kingdom) on 2002-04-12 18:51 [#00170169]
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That was so deep and stuff *sniff* It could use some similies and metaphors
Harketh! The photosynthetic fallen courageous castaways of the melancholy canopy drifteth across the limitless leaf litter like a smurf without a little white hat Speaketh thou toeth me! what do the leaves say?? SHHHHHHH!!! Listen... *brrrrrrrrnt* Ah, the leaves hath farted on me I respect them And I join them, tumbling, turning, twisting and farting on unsuspecting poets across the limitless leaf litter
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Taoist Blockade
from Wales on 2002-04-12 18:53 [#00170175]
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My name is Hecta im the Bo Selecta I know im deaf cause I cant hear what cho sayin to me...
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2002-04-12 18:55 [#00170179]
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I NEVER SAID A WORD!
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Taoist Blockade
from Wales on 2002-04-12 18:59 [#00170181]
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My heart is like a birds nest wallowing in the fog of your contempt lizards have moved in stolen the eggs of my hope that never came, Ive seen it all, Im going home, Im very much alone, in this subterreanean cyber dome.
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Taoist Blockade
from Wales on 2002-04-12 19:02 [#00170184]
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I love you too much, your lack of speech is erased from my mind, I want to make love to you in the forest, anywhere but the brothel
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w M w
from London (United Kingdom) on 2002-04-12 19:02 [#00170185]
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oooh, your use of metaphor was a warm gust of wind from a pile of dead seaguls at the beach!
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2002-04-12 19:03 [#00170187]
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an eternal pause like a nuclear holocaust zombies munching on my innards jesus saves but i'm a sinner a cannibal sucking out my brains after watching "revenge of the bloodsucking freaks from intergalactic section 23 Vs the horrific zombie mutants who stopped living and became messed up squid-headed mushroom eaters" i'll never be the same
again
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w M w
from London (United Kingdom) on 2002-04-12 19:05 [#00170189]
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ooh, nice one, I like how one line had a rediculous amount of syllables lol
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2002-04-12 19:10 [#00170194]
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;) yes i had fun with that one!
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Taoist Blockade
from Wales on 2002-04-12 19:13 [#00170198]
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I took off her shirt... BWAHANANANAWAA I took off her bra... WHAHAHHABNBABA I took off her panties.... WHAHATAHAH You know what I SAW! WEEHAHHAHAHAHA.
A dick.
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w M w
from London (United Kingdom) on 2002-04-12 19:13 [#00170199]
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hmm, now I'll play with the technique of repetition the same line, like a reoccuring theme or something, first I need a totally stupid line that does not deserve repetition:
repulsively attractive attractively repulsive I would not eat a pizza with nipple-ronies
They look delecious I can't stop thinking about them I might not eat a pizza with nipple-ronies
They look disguisting I want to try one *I ate the pizza with nipple-ronies*
I hate those stupid "I am " poems that teachers all got together in their evil castle and decided to make all their kids to.
I am steve I like steve when I cry I feel like steve I dream of steve I am steve
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2002-04-12 19:18 [#00170201]
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hey look! i'm a wrestler and i didn't even know it!!!!
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2002-04-12 19:20 [#00170205]
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and i'm a goddam screenwriter!!!!
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Resident Evil
from heat some coffee, mmm, mmm (Australia) on 2002-04-12 19:24 [#00170212]
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I can't write good poems Perhaps I'd be better if I was friends with Gnomes Theres no way I can rhyeme (Or spell) Oh look, I'm outta time (hell).
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Resident Evil
from heat some coffee, mmm, mmm (Australia) on 2002-04-12 19:25 [#00170214]
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"and i'm a goddam screenwriter!!!!"
You wrote Murder, She Wrote!! All hail marlowe.
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w M w
from London (United Kingdom) on 2002-04-12 19:26 [#00170216]
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Your wrestler only has a 2 in punching.
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2002-04-12 19:27 [#00170218]
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hey! you forgot THE DUKES OF HAZZARD!! ;)
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2002-04-12 19:28 [#00170219]
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careful - i can still piledriver you thru a table you big enchilada!!
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Resident Evil
from heat some coffee, mmm, mmm (Australia) on 2002-04-12 19:29 [#00170221]
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"hey! you forgot THE DUKES OF HAZZARD!! ;)"
I'm an idiot! How could I forget the Dukes! Well atleast Daisy :0)
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2002-04-12 19:32 [#00170227]
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i shagged her you know ;)
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uzim
on 2002-04-12 19:50 [#00170251]
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black i feel so empty into my cocoon of darkness too afraid to look deeper inside this chasm the lights are glowing and disappearing far away from me alone staring at this dead light i'm the only one to see
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2002-04-12 20:26 [#00170291]
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well you know how to lower the mood at the drop of a hat huh?
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uzim
on 2002-04-12 20:35 [#00170305]
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sorry... i felt quite sad lately...
something more joyous: http://www.yomgaille.com/bordel/un_lapin.html (if you haven't already seen it :))
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2002-04-12 20:39 [#00170313]
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cunilingus or use your fingers
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