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yeah i made a short film over in march. pls watch and make me feel good about it i feel delicate about my art recently yeah so i need some comments from you guys - and they better be making me feel good about my creations and plans |
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its about a guy in the future living inside away from the ghosts that have taken over the streets and the whole world. it's sort of a comment on the future and changing times and like how people's hearts and the things they make and collect are insane - so how could the future not be filled with ghosts. well i dunno i hope a lot of it's in the tone cos it certainly isnt straight forwardly explained. things that are intentional: - the crappy shot on NO budget look. - the main character's stiff voice over and wooden acting style - the general sort of amateur-nezz of it all well it wasnt intentional but i made it work i hope you agree. OK ITS A FIRST EDIT I HAVNT BEEN BOTHERED TO GO BACK TO YET, but its actually dead good i think. |
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other films made this year 5 of them were about a girl getting raped basically cos that's every students idea of dramatic film epic. everything was shot on 550d to make things look actually very dramatic film epic - rinsing the depth of field. of course none of them had good music/characters/story. i mean im actually fuckin about when im being a snob on the internet but jeeeez i mean these muthafuckaz made some basic shit and i jus dont dig that. |
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i hate depth of field |
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there is a black person in my film, and im just browsing threads and i see that maybe you guys will be impressed that there is a black person in my film |
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wow a black person!! |
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this is well done though, good job |
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verified black by staz on 2011-07-02 13:47 [#02416878] |
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thx man :) oh and: folks could you all put things like good job in bold like i did there to try and hustle more people into commenting and thumbing up my creations and plans |
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good job! i really liked it. |
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nice wig!. the short flows in harmony Bravo! |
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i liked it. it delivered. i'm about to attempt to write my first script, it's a black comedy about the tv/film industry and fans/stalking. |
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GREAT JOB |
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aw thanks guys really do appreciate the comments being all positive n stuff. i need to do a lot of work to make it better. i slapped the audio together really carelessly and its not prefectly recorded (musics good tho innit im quite happy with that). need to change some bits in the edit to make things feel clearer. i mean, i just keep thinking the idea is onto something, but how could anyone possibly get what the plots about. i feel like i need to emphasize some things. did it really make sense at all? |
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cool! i never really write scripts i just feel like no one'll read that. Is it something you plan on making yourself? |
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i'm downloading it and will watch it later. i dont know how to do bolds. but WELL DONE, GOOD JOB, i'm sure its great. |
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