|
|
Wolfslice
from Bay Area, CA (United States) on 2008-12-15 18:39 [#02259057]
Points: 4909 Status: Regular
|
|
Fen In My Head (2:28)
Fen In My Head (Funtastwich Fen Funnymix) (2:36)
The main track is about as dark a song as I can make. I'd hope it would scare small children and such. The funnymix should cleanse the pallet a bit afterwards.
Hi.
|
|
DirtyPriest
from Copenhagen (Denmark) on 2008-12-15 19:11 [#02259061]
Points: 5499 Status: Lurker
|
|
I hear a lot of cliché horror sounds over trite drums.
Maybe a discarded Insane Clown Posse beat?
With all the irony on this board, i'm not sure if its actually supposed to be scary, but i can tell you that it doesnt work on that level for me.
The remix is better. It's actually pretty good. I like how it evolves in a way you don't predict. Hearing the ending cheered me up a lot. You should cut the crap, go straight to the end, do some nice chord progression and turn it into some alternative pop (an idea i'm sure you and the rest of the board will probably loathe).
|
|
Wolfslice
from Bay Area, CA (United States) on 2008-12-15 19:24 [#02259063]
Points: 4909 Status: Regular
|
|
Hi Dirty, appreciate the listens ;p
nah nothing discarded, ICP or otherwise... it's all hand sequenced, and the non drum sounds are built 90% from scratch. I can see where you'd think it sounds rather cliche, and I agree with that. Most of my stuff is pretty cliche. I don't really see the drums as being trite though, it's really just a standard hip hopkish beat that doesn't try and do too much. To each his own though...
Glad you liked the remix (or the end ;p), when I have some time I'll see if I can bust a re-remix that I'm happy with.
|
|
DirtyPriest
from Copenhagen (Denmark) on 2008-12-15 19:31 [#02259064]
Points: 5499 Status: Lurker | Followup to Wolfslice: #02259063
|
|
If you made the sounds from scratch, then its actually quite impressive. I think the problem might be that the drums doesnt fit with the rest of it. I don't know. Its very late, and you just confused me. I will return tomorrow and see what others think, so i can join the choir.
Keep up the music! I should let you know, i mostly don't bother giving out any of my precious critique, unless i feel what i hear has some kind of value or effort put into it, so you should consider yourself proud :D
|
|
Wolfslice
from Bay Area, CA (United States) on 2008-12-15 19:41 [#02259065]
Points: 4909 Status: Regular | Followup to DirtyPriest: #02259064
|
|
Always thankful for honest critique... I've taken a lot of criticism from this board and put it to good use over the past couple years. After listening to your 30 min mix you posted the other week, I know you know your shit too.
|
|
glasse
from Harrisburg (United States) on 2008-12-15 19:46 [#02259066]
Points: 4211 Status: Regular | Show recordbag
|
|
i get the vibe. i think these were both good, nothing wrong with getting a little cheeky here and there. like twin or cylob etc., it should go without saying actually.
|
|
Wolfslice
from Bay Area, CA (United States) on 2008-12-15 19:52 [#02259067]
Points: 4909 Status: Regular | Followup to glasse: #02259066
|
|
thanks glasse, that's just the way I see it as well.
|
|
w M w
from London (United Kingdom) on 2008-12-17 23:45 [#02259433]
Points: 21452 Status: Lurker
|
|
I like the 2nd half of funt best, word to your mother.
|
|
Wolfslice
from Bay Area, CA (United States) on 2008-12-18 00:23 [#02259438]
Points: 4909 Status: Regular | Followup to w M w: #02259433
|
|
|
| Attached picture |
|
|
|
Messageboard index
|