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I need suggestions for the direction of this. I just tried to capture feelings and let them ride. The track has two variations, i was playing with different things. Second half is more layed back then runs off. First half is more micro editing and beat timing. please listen and give suggestions. |
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First part is nice, but the chopping is done badly i think. I thought something was wrong with the player at first, because it sounds so unnatural. Something needs to be done about the drums in both parts - Some EQ'ing would be nice (Sounds a tad "sharp") The second part is just boring IMO. |
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1st part felt too complex for the sake of being complex 2nd part was better however the pad synths sound too cheap as if chosen at random from pro 53 vst i would add more atmosphere, try n make it sound more organic rather than pre-setty if you know what i mean |
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hmm.. didn't care for the first part so much-- i like the skitteriness of the beat but it feels like there's a bit of a disconnect between the beat itself and the milky synth behind it for the second half I love the beat (it's like a shiny corkscrew of drums) and vocal sample.. for the pad I'd tend to agree with rudster though- it has a very identifiable upward saw-y sound-- I would try messing with some new pads and building up a small arsenal of little sounds to add detail with. keep posting the newer versions if you continue working on it! |
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for the most part all that really needs doing here is on the side of mastering some of those first sounds. i feel more depth and atmosphere is needed there and perhaps less resonance all over. there is also a certain lack of energy and suspense which i feel would match this track nicely. |
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