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been spending the last couple of nights doing this, nothing ground breaking though, beat comes in at 2 mins, but it's a bit sketchy, needs more work, i'm just was curious to see what others thought. any pos/neg criticism welcome |
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even though i think the flow is pretty organic it seems cold to me and a bit like there's too much of a late autechre influence, which ruins the experience for me. also cull the 2min intro, its pointless, especilally if u want quick feedback from people. hope this was helpful. |
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thanks, i thought the intro might be too long, i sort of accidently made it sound like autechre, because of that beat, i was jamming and i just recorded it in real time, then i had to add some sad synth to it |
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I really enjoyed it actually, loved the "sad synth" especially. I would shorten the intro though and possibly have more of a build up to the drop. |
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i'm gunna keep working on it, thanks |
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That was quite nice! |
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this is some very tidy eerie shiz, the intro seems a bit detached from the main part of the song, seems more like an attached skit, but all good. download disabled - BOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! |
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oh cool, I've been waiting to hear one of your tracks larn. I'll give it a proper listen when I get home. |
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it's great, the soundscape is top, the beat too, but mostly i like the way it develops. good jAb |
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thanks |
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heavy mood! nice :D |
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i liked it as two separate tracks: pt1 & pt2, lets separate... pt1/ first 2 mins:: good intro.. makes me think of a polluted city pt2/ the rest of the track:: nice ambient chord/echo/dream progression. //NEG: it's hard to transition between these two "separate tracks". they're nothing alike. use the intro with more of an electronic glitch followed track i reckon. main part (pt2) needs one or two more extra instruments through-out... as a modern ambient track: i think there needs to be a tone difference within prob 3 periods of the track or more. i shouldn't be able to seek through the track and get the same feel through-out. when listening in real time it feels like i'm constantly standing in the same place. perhaps one of the (newly & faster?) instruments should drop octaves throughout or more layers should be added? //POS: pt1: some will say it's long, maybe not.. but it needs a proper dark gritty electro track to follow (at the start of an album ..that matches.. perhaps?). great song flow in pt2. rad channel volume mixing. the voices mixed in nicely. good echo fx. ..ps; plz drop an mp3 somewhere next time, i think i re-downloaded this flash about 30 times because it keeps hitting the end. |
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Sorry for the lateness of this... The first portion of the song is nice, really kind of good background music, but the track really shines when the beat comes in, all the little sfx and layers of atmosphere are really intense and provoking. The only thing I felt that was kind of a second thought was the ending...it just kind of ends. I'm left feeling a bit unsatisfied. There was no release of the pent up tension, it just kind of fades. I really feel it should have a very pronounced kind of ending. Overall it kind of has a murcof feel, but thats definitely a good thing. Really good stuff. |
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I agree with Diazo and I think the track was enjoyable, I would very much like to hear the finished resault! |
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that was very good. terrific ambience in the beginning. second part was good too. |
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